the ocean keeps me going | Teen Ink
  1. Home
  2. Poetry
  3. Free Verse
  4. the ocean keeps me going

the ocean keeps me going

November 9, 2011
By SHINeegirlg6 BRONZE, Kuala Lumpur, Other
More by this author
SHINeegirlg6 BRONZE, Kuala Lumpur, Other
1 article 0 photos 0 comments

Favorite Quote:
sweet and sour is my life, bitter are all my insipiration,what i get? one bowl of awesomeness

View profile

as the breeze hits the sea,
living is all i can think about and be,
seashells reminds me of a secret,
so secured and protected,
the sand reminds me of how moist my thoughts are,
it does not ache or put up a scar,
the ocean has reminded me the reason to live,
and now the dark side will never deceive,

© Kristin R., Los Altos, CA

The author's comments:
this is inspired by how teen now days tend to commit suicide and to me it's very wrong.
Post a comment
Submit your own

Similar Articles

Previous Next
Poetry
Pretentious
By Kimora Braithwaite
Indian Trail, NC
Poetry
Silence
By bitty09 SILVER
Claymont, Delaware
bitty09 SILVER, Claymont, Delaware
5 articles 0 photos 0 comments
View profile
Poetry
Remembrance
By Rachel Bellah BRONZE
Seattle, Washington
Rachel Bellah BRONZE, Seattle, Washington
4 articles 0 photos 1 comment
View profile
Poetry
Nothing good comes from Pyromania
By Nelle PLATINUM
Crewkerne, Other
Nelle PLATINUM, Crewkerne, Other
21 articles 10 photos 49 comments
View profile
Poetry
That Dreary Day
By jessicaah GOLD
Huber Heights., Ohio
jessicaah GOLD, Huber Heights., Ohio
12 articles 17 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I say what I want to say and do what I want to do. There's no in between. People will either love you for it or hate you for it. "

View profile
Poetry
Time
By Lost-In-Life GOLD
Whitby, Other
Lost-In-Life GOLD, Whitby, Other
11 articles 0 photos 299 comments

Favorite Quote:
It's never to late, if it weren't for the last minute many things would never get done!

View profile

JOIN THE DISCUSSION

This article has 0 comments.