November 8, 2011
By KylaK SILVER, Hanover, Kansas
KylaK SILVER, Hanover, Kansas
6 articles 0 photos 5 comments

I am falling.
Falling apart,
Falling down,
Faliing to pieces.
I am falling.

My hopes,
My dreams,
My prayers,
My pride,
They are falling.

My every breath,
My every step,
They are falling.

I can't speak,
I can't think,
Without me falling.

I can't help it,
I can't stop it.
I'm still falling.

Will you catch me?
Will you stop this pain,
Before I shatter?
I'm still falling.

"Help!" I cry in silence,
I cannot breathe,
I cannot live,
While I'm falling.

Will someone please
Take away this
And Hurt?
They cause my falling.

I stumble, I cry,
I hurt... I surrender,
Why for more pain?
I am falling.

I beg,
Will you catch me?
Take me back to the good,
The happy,
The spirited times I once knew.
I can't stand my own Falling.

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byebye said...
on Dec. 9 2011 at 6:35 pm
byebye, Nevermore, Other
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Very nice! I know what you were getting at with the last sentence, but try to find a way to make those last words really strong. Nice work, I have a poem called Falling too, so I was intrigued by this. Turns out, our poems are completely different! It's so cool how differently people can interpret titles and words.

pitt98 GOLD said...
on Dec. 4 2011 at 6:57 pm
pitt98 GOLD, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
10 articles 3 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It's not the days in life we remember, rather the moments." 
- Walt Disney

cool, try to think a little more metephorically 

on Dec. 1 2011 at 6:06 pm
RebeccaJoy DIAMOND, Springville, New York
56 articles 12 photos 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes it's kinda fun to do the impossible." -Walt Disney
"Go live your dream"-Disney's Tangled

I love the way you carried the reading through it. Its really good. I like your format too

on Nov. 23 2011 at 11:52 pm
Kayotic PLATINUM, Goodyear, Arizona
37 articles 9 photos 84 comments

Favorite Quote:
You aren't having fun unless you're commiting sin~ Priest

It is pretty good.

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