Down So Slow

November 17, 2011
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My chest tightens as you walk away.
I watch your back,
reliving all the memories,
good and bad.
Why did you have to go?
Why did you leave me,
begging in the cold,
begging you not to go.
My voice shakes as I yell after you.
No words just a strong screaming note, tears streaking my face as you turn.
I see your eyes, deep and blue.
They pierce my soul, as they've done many times before.
But you keep walking,
leaving me.
And I fall,

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dontforget This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 23, 2011 at 8:00 pm
Wow, this is amazing! I love the imagery and tone!
Aizuki said...
Nov. 23, 2011 at 3:12 pm
This was really vivid, I can see the scene play out perfectly! =)
KatherineHeights replied...
Nov. 23, 2011 at 5:38 pm
Thanks so much for the positive feedback! :)
Amanda24 replied...
Nov. 23, 2011 at 8:00 pm
Amazing :) !!!!!!!!!!
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