Creatures

November 17, 2011
By Ranea GOLD, Elkhart, Indiana
Ranea GOLD, Elkhart, Indiana
18 articles 0 photos 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It can always be worse, so put on a happy face and laugh!" (my own quote) &
"Sticks and stones may break my bones, but words may scar my soul."


Creatures
The moon rises
The sun sets
The world turns dark
And the creatures of night
Find their way out

The innocent sleep
The wicked trick
The thirsty drink
And the mad find
Their victims for the night

The young dance
The old sit
The evil hunt
And the pure stay
So they’re not turned

Time passes
Ever so slowly
Tick… tock…
Tick… tock…

The moon sets
The sun rises
The world turns bright
And the creatures of night
Find their hiding places
Once again

The author's comments:
i wrote this when i was wondering what happened at night and what we would do if the supernatural creatures really did exist.

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Lexie96 GOLD said...
on Jan. 8 2012 at 6:59 pm
Lexie96 GOLD, Havana, Illinois
11 articles 0 photos 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
Now Cinderella don't you go to sleep, it's such a bitter form of refuge, oh don't you know the kingdom's under siege, and everbody needs you. - The Killers

Not too shabby! I like the end of it a lot, it was pretty well done... keep writing! Thanks for your feedback on my poetry, as well!

Ranea GOLD said...
on Jan. 8 2012 at 12:14 am
Ranea GOLD, Elkhart, Indiana
18 articles 0 photos 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It can always be worse, so put on a happy face and laugh!" (my own quote) &
"Sticks and stones may break my bones, but words may scar my soul."

thanks, it means a lot to me that someone else likes my writing and doesnt declare it garbage

on Jan. 6 2012 at 8:39 pm
Zinaidia SILVER, Moreno Valley, California
8 articles 3 photos 78 comments

Favorite Quote:
\\\"Whatever you are, be a good one.\\\"

This one is by far my favorite. Very unique! Keep writing.




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