I am free

November 8, 2011
By Hbaff GOLD, MErrimack, New Hampshire
Hbaff GOLD, MErrimack, New Hampshire
12 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
Maybe if i stare he'll come faster.


Today I am free.


I am free of your tight grasp.

I am free of the darkness you have laid upon me.

I am free of your walls that surround me like a prisoner.

I am free of the shattered pieces that have been a part of me for so long.

I am free of the hooks that you cast my way.

I am free of the charm that made me believe something untrue.

I am free of my naive mind unconditionally thinking about you.

I am free of the burning tears that have scarred my cheeks.

Today I am free of you.



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Hannabug GOLD said...
on Aug. 16 2012 at 8:14 pm
Hannabug GOLD, Winona, Minnesota
10 articles 0 photos 141 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't only practice your art, but force your way into its secrets, for it and knowledge can raise men to the Divine." Ludwig van Beethoven

Amazingness!!!

on Dec. 4 2011 at 7:18 pm
DifferentTeen PLATINUM, Seaford, Delaware
32 articles 2 photos 332 comments

Favorite Quote:
"There’s no such thing as true love, just spurts of insanity—falling over and over again, thinking that won’t happen to me"

Wow this was amzing! I usually don't like poems as much if theres no ryhming in it, because it takes some serious to skill to write a sucsessful poem without it. But you killed it! haha. I also love the picture for this, it matches perfectly. Wonderful job!

izyfizy GOLD said...
on Dec. 4 2011 at 6:56 pm
izyfizy GOLD, Alameda, California
16 articles 0 photos 78 comments

Favorite Quote:
You all laugh because I'm different,
I laugh because you're all the same.
- Anonymous

izyfizy <3's this!!!! woo! :D

on Nov. 25 2011 at 9:28 pm
blackrose666 BRONZE, Sterling Hgts, Michigan
2 articles 16 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
dont give up on something you cant go a day without thinking bout

awesome poem. :) keep writing 

on Nov. 25 2011 at 9:27 pm
sweetheart2598 SILVER, Atlatna, Georgia
5 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
Lord Yes

LOVE IT nice job

on Nov. 25 2011 at 3:29 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
1 article 0 photos 1985 comments

Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

Yayy! Pretty! I loved what it said

on Nov. 22 2011 at 4:23 pm
ReadWriteBreathe PLATINUM, Pocatello, Idaho
24 articles 4 photos 114 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You have to consider the possibility that God does not like you" Tyler Durden Fight Club

I really like this. I love the repetition of "i am free" and I like the story that you tell. Really great job

on Nov. 22 2011 at 4:20 pm
ashleyn PLATINUM, Zeeland, Michigan
39 articles 2 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't take life to seriously, nobody makes it out alive anyways"-Unknown

I love it!!! Never stop writing! (:

on Nov. 22 2011 at 4:07 pm
JonathanVondrasek DIAMOND, Oak Park, Illinois
58 articles 7 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
" CONTAINS ODOR-FIGHTING "ATOMIC-ROBOTS" THAT "SHOOT LASERS" AT YOUR "STENCH MONSTERS" AND REPLACES THEM WITH FRESH, CLEAN. MASCULINE "SCENT ELVES"." - Old Spice deodorant

I like it!


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