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Today I am free.


I am free of your tight grasp.

I am free of the darkness you have laid upon me.

I am free of your walls that surround me like a prisoner.

I am free of the shattered pieces that have been a part of me for so long.

I am free of the hooks that you cast my way.

I am free of the charm that made me believe something untrue.

I am free of my naive mind unconditionally thinking about you.

I am free of the burning tears that have scarred my cheeks.

Today I am free of you.



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HannabugThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 16, 2012 at 8:14 pm:
Amazingness!!!
 
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DifferentTeenThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 4, 2011 at 7:18 pm:
Wow this was amzing! I usually don't like poems as much if theres no ryhming in it, because it takes some serious to skill to write a sucsessful poem without it. But you killed it! haha. I also love the picture for this, it matches perfectly. Wonderful job!
 
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izyfizyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 4, 2011 at 6:56 pm:
izyfizy <3's this!!!! woo! :D
 
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blackrose666 said...
Nov. 25, 2011 at 9:28 pm:
awesome poem. :) keep writing 
 
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sweetheart2598 said...
Nov. 25, 2011 at 9:27 pm:
LOVE IT nice job
 
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Hikari.This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 25, 2011 at 3:29 pm:
Yayy! Pretty! I loved what it said
 
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ReadWriteBreatheThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 22, 2011 at 4:23 pm:
I really like this. I love the repetition of "i am free" and I like the story that you tell. Really great job
 
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ashleyn said...
Nov. 22, 2011 at 4:20 pm:
I love it!!! Never stop writing! (:
 
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JohnWThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 22, 2011 at 4:07 pm:
I like it!
 
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