shhhh

November 8, 2011
By eliana924 GOLD, New York, New York
eliana924 GOLD, New York, New York
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rain-
drops slipping through
the clouds spilling into
puddles
like a Whisper
sending shivers
down
hot skin
drip-
drop
slinky She-bodies
dancing through the
sky
feel the Rain
wrapping round me smothering
my hushed breath (...i want
more)
her fingers on my
lips tracing---shhhh



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eliana924 GOLD said...
on Jan. 2 2012 at 8:12 pm
eliana924 GOLD, New York, New York
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Thanks! And yes, I'm looking through your work now.

on Dec. 28 2011 at 7:04 pm
Crazymexican GOLD, Jay, Maine
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I like this very good! Check out my poems? give me tips if you can thanks!

eliana924 GOLD said...
on Dec. 20 2011 at 11:31 pm
eliana924 GOLD, New York, New York
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lol thanks

on Dec. 20 2011 at 9:07 pm
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mystical!         




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