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Flight of the Crow

November 9, 2011
By StuieWLG SILVER, Dublin, Other
StuieWLG SILVER, Dublin, Other
6 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
'I did not attend the funeral but i approved of it'-Mark Twain
'Every man must see to hope. For without hope, there is no man to see ' -Stuie Larner


Invisible in the night,
The crow circles the grey tower.
It's coat at sight,
Seems dark and evil, bitter and sour.
Yet inside is light,
Our souls carried, on the witching hour.

Buildings standing still,
Colourless and empty, filled with life.
Bustling movement at will,
Towards the sharp,dark blessed knife.

The Crows Flight Ended.
Our light never reaching where intended.



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on Mar. 24 2012 at 2:28 pm
Shahiro PLATINUM, Johnston, Iowa
20 articles 2 photos 262 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Soon we must all choose between what is right and what is easy." - Dumbledore (Goblet of Fire)

Intriguing (I think I spelled that wrong) I really liked it 5/5! Please check out my work, it would mean a lot!

on Dec. 1 2011 at 6:32 pm
StuieWLG SILVER, Dublin, Other
6 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
'I did not attend the funeral but i approved of it'-Mark Twain
'Every man must see to hope. For without hope, there is no man to see ' -Stuie Larner

sound man hahaha

jason said...
on Dec. 1 2011 at 6:25 pm

it is a good poem ... its readable..not like half them ou there. :D.. ehhh 7 out of 10 for me. :P

 


on Dec. 1 2011 at 6:01 pm
StuieWLG SILVER, Dublin, Other
6 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
'I did not attend the funeral but i approved of it'-Mark Twain
'Every man must see to hope. For without hope, there is no man to see ' -Stuie Larner

thank you :) i'm glad you liked it :) 

AvaJay GOLD said...
on Nov. 24 2011 at 9:49 pm
AvaJay GOLD, Spokane, Washington
13 articles 4 photos 184 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me not pray to be sheltered from dangers, but to be fearless in facing them. Let me not pray for the stilling of my pain, but for the heart to conquer it.
~ Tagore

I'm speechless... That was beautiful. I'm reading it again... And again. 5 stars. Breathtaking. Love it.