Flight of the Crow

November 9, 2011
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Invisible in the night,
The crow circles the grey tower.
It's coat at sight,
Seems dark and evil, bitter and sour.
Yet inside is light,
Our souls carried, on the witching hour.

Buildings standing still,
Colourless and empty, filled with life.
Bustling movement at will,
Towards the sharp,dark blessed knife.

The Crows Flight Ended.
Our light never reaching where intended.

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fiNd_THe_fLaMEThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 24, 2012 at 2:28 pm
Intriguing (I think I spelled that wrong) I really liked it 5/5! Please check out my work, it would mean a lot!
jason said...
Dec. 1, 2011 at 6:25 pm

it is a good poem ... its readable..not like half them ou there. :D.. ehhh 7 out of 10 for me. :P


StuieWLG replied...
Dec. 1, 2011 at 6:32 pm
sound man hahaha
WhittyKitty This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 24, 2011 at 9:49 pm
I'm speechless... That was beautiful. I'm reading it again... And again. 5 stars. Breathtaking. Love it.
StuieWLG replied...
Dec. 1, 2011 at 6:01 pm
thank you :) i'm glad you liked it :) 
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