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Some times it’s better
to cower in the corner
to not be noticed
to not know what it’s like to be
loved
missed
heart broken
or depressed.

Some times it’s better
to have no friends
then to be used
to not have a boyfriend
then to be heart broken
to not try
so you can’t fail

Sometimes it’s better
to hide from reality
then face the facts
to live in a fantasy land
as opposed being hurt
To not talk
so you can’t be embarrassed.

Some times it’s better
but some time’s it’s not




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LivingMYLifeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 23, 2011 at 7:13 pm:
i really like this. so true.
 
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HermodThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 18, 2011 at 10:55 am:

This is a very powerful poem, and it has a lot of feeling in it, I can tell.

There's really not much to say about it concerning corrections, since poetic license allows you to get away with a lot of it. One thing, though, you put "as opposed being hurt." There should be a "to" there, after "opposed."

Overall its a very touching poem. 5/5

 
Jennypig replied...
Nov. 18, 2011 at 9:14 pm :
Ah, I failed to proof read that... oh well =P
 
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