Some times it's better but some times it's not

November 3, 2011
By Jennypig GOLD, Winslow, Maine
Jennypig GOLD, Winslow, Maine
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Favorite Quote:
Get living or get dying -Stepen King
We are a little weird and life is a little weird, so when we find someone who's weirdness is compatible with our own, we fall in a mutual weirdness and call it love. -Dr. Seuss


Some times it’s better
to cower in the corner
to not be noticed
to not know what it’s like to be
loved
missed
heart broken
or depressed.

Some times it’s better
to have no friends
then to be used
to not have a boyfriend
then to be heart broken
to not try
so you can’t fail

Sometimes it’s better
to hide from reality
then face the facts
to live in a fantasy land
as opposed being hurt
To not talk
so you can’t be embarrassed.

Some times it’s better
but some time’s it’s not



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on Nov. 23 2011 at 7:13 pm
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It." ~some book that i don't remember the name of

"Live Life Like There's No Yesterday" ~ random billboard

"If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You" ` ~ Kerli?

i really like this. so true.

Jennypig GOLD said...
on Nov. 18 2011 at 9:14 pm
Jennypig GOLD, Winslow, Maine
13 articles 0 photos 63 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get living or get dying -Stepen King
We are a little weird and life is a little weird, so when we find someone who's weirdness is compatible with our own, we fall in a mutual weirdness and call it love. -Dr. Seuss

Ah, I failed to proof read that... oh well =P

AngelP GOLD said...
on Nov. 18 2011 at 10:55 am
AngelP GOLD, Miami Beach, Florida
13 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Procrastination is the art of keeping up with yesterday."

This is a very powerful poem, and it has a lot of feeling in it, I can tell.

There's really not much to say about it concerning corrections, since poetic license allows you to get away with a lot of it. One thing, though, you put "as opposed being hurt." There should be a "to" there, after "opposed."

Overall its a very touching poem. 5/5





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