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They say it’s all about the journey, I used to disagree.
Because I loved the destination but now I start to see
That when I finally get there, I think about the time
When we outsang the radio and thought we sounded fine.
The many fights that made Dad say, “I’ll turn this thing around!”
And how easy we’d make him laugh to calm him right back down.
The countless times we took a stop to stretch our legs were great,
Because space can get pretty tight when the car is packed with eight.
We all took turns to close our eyes and have a little nap
Or listen to whoever drives get lost and blame the map.
Oh how I love it in the car when we’re all having fun
So how I hate when we arrive and all of that is done.
Next to the pool, with earphones in, those times I can’t recall
But memories of getting there always do stand tall.
So Destination, here we are, but not as a family.
And as for me, I now agree, it’s all in the journey.

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HaleyDRog. said...
Apr. 2, 2011 at 10:44 am:
This is amazing! I loved the story and the words you used. Very nice job!
 
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Libra97 said...
Apr. 2, 2011 at 9:18 am:
I loved this poem.  Great job!  I thought the rhyming was excellent and went very well with this poem.  To me, rhymes help keep the beat of the poem.
 
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HorseLover said...
Apr. 2, 2011 at 6:29 am:
I really like how you made this consistenly rhyme throughout and you really stuck with your topic. Good job!
 
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emoducks said...
Mar. 28, 2011 at 11:30 am:
this made my day :)
 
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BrielleIsTheBomb said...
Mar. 27, 2011 at 5:44 pm:
this is PPERFECT:)
 
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Jaybug said...
Mar. 11, 2011 at 8:26 am:
I like this poem a lot. It reminds of my trips with my family to the beach.
 
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Grandma said...
Feb. 23, 2011 at 2:23 pm:
-this is nice and sooo true
 
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lilmo23 said...
Feb. 17, 2011 at 7:13 pm:
i loved it! so true... so INCREDIBLY true! :) awesome job. hey would you mind checking out my poems?
 
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shrutimallik said...
Feb. 15, 2011 at 11:45 am:
omg this piece made my day :)
 
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msoccerm345 said...
Feb. 4, 2011 at 12:29 pm:
i love it!! it reminds me of my trips to Arkansas!
 
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--sarah said...
Jan. 26, 2011 at 5:26 pm:
Best poem I've read today :)
 
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TheKingThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 26, 2011 at 3:08 pm:
Funny and powerful at the same time, multiple levels of depth, excellent rhyme... This absolutely incredible, one of the best I have read
 
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txdrama said...
Jan. 26, 2011 at 12:17 pm:

Very well written!

I LOVE IT!

 
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Emmadilemma said...
Jan. 7, 2011 at 6:56 pm:
that was absoulutely amazing!!!!!! best one yet!!
 
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OriginalCarbonation said...
Jan. 4, 2011 at 3:54 pm:
i love the surface and the deeper meaning. both are so striking. soo well done. it gets me everytime i read it. :)
 
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Kryssy said...
Jan. 4, 2011 at 1:52 pm:
hey I totallylove it. it seems like a narrrative poem but then it doesn't. nice one :)
 
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annexgrey This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 17, 2010 at 7:57 pm:
This is great! :)
 
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CommonSense7 said...
Dec. 15, 2010 at 2:56 pm:
I liked it, but if I may, I would like to extend some sculpting critizium; break away from the constant rhymes, I know you can do it any-time, but sometimes the rhymes get old, and people can anticipate what's going to be told. I suggest you write at least one free verse, so you can break the poet's curse, because if only you right in constant rhythem, people will begin not to listen. =) 
 
StreetSense5 replied...
Dec. 18, 2010 at 2:42 pm :
You hypocrite! You rhymed that whole freakin' thing! I thought the poem was marvelous, I wouldn't change a thing about the writing voice. If I may, CommonSense7, you seem like an oppressive jerk and you spelled rhythm wrong, genius. Give criticism when you how, but until then shut up.
 
Eielen A. replied...
Dec. 25, 2010 at 8:41 am :
yeah idk sometimes rhymes dont work but i think there great in this poem
 
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