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They say it’s all about the journey, I used to disagree.
Because I loved the destination but now I start to see
That when I finally get there, I think about the time
When we outsang the radio and thought we sounded fine.
The many fights that made Dad say, “I’ll turn this thing around!”
And how easy we’d make him laugh to calm him right back down.
The countless times we took a stop to stretch our legs were great,
Because space can get pretty tight when the car is packed with eight.
We all took turns to close our eyes and have a little nap
Or listen to whoever drives get lost and blame the map.
Oh how I love it in the car when we’re all having fun
So how I hate when we arrive and all of that is done.
Next to the pool, with earphones in, those times I can’t recall
But memories of getting there always do stand tall.
So Destination, here we are, but not as a family.
And as for me, I now agree, it’s all in the journey.

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IndiloveThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
today at 7:25 am:
I have a family of eight and i completly agree!!!! We're always getting lost and blaring the radio. I love this poem!!! Great work!
 
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AlannaWriting said...
Apr. 16 at 7:48 am:
I really love this poem, I really love poems about taking your time with things. This poem was very relatable to me and I really loved it.
 
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MissShahThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 25 at 12:13 am:
woow! i love it.. seems that you have got a mental approach like me for me too have experienced such a thing! :]
 
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coletteF said...
Mar. 19 at 10:25 pm:
I like this poem's rhyming pattern a lot! You've created a scene, which is hard to do with words. Great job!
 
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Emilee K. This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 19 at 8:20 am:
This is so true! Especially the radio part and being packed i can relate! Great job!
 
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MiniMags1442 said...
Mar. 12 at 2:30 pm:
Wow, great poem. Breathe taking.
 
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Bookworm1997This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 4 at 10:54 pm:
Completely true! It was so creative how you compared the journey of life with a humorous car trip.
 
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Dreamer13This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 4 at 10:40 am:
could you check out some of my work? id love to get some constructive feedback!
 
Dreamer13This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 4 at 10:43 am :
and by the way, i absolutely love your poem! this past summer my family took a road trip from colorado to new york... that sure was a journey! thanks for writing that, i can now totally relate
 
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ms.practicallyintellectualThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 4 at 5:45 am:
a beautiful poem... i so agree with you... during the journey of life, you come across so many new things... you grow as a family & you grow as a person... it makes the final fruit sweeter & more valueable...
 
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AlexisNicole822This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 29 at 8:00 pm:
Wow. I almost wanted to cry. My family is only four, my parents, me and my little sister. We usually have quiet or argumentive car conversations, but the whole fact that it's life and a journey. That really got me. This was amazing.
 
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D.KirklandThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 13 at 7:40 pm:
i thought all that is true. i happend to me but there was 6 of us and i was the only girl and i had to listen to the driver sing while all the guys watched movies in the back seats. it was fun and how i miss it. but i cant wait to do it again next november.
 
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dickbutkiss said...
Jan. 13 at 10:49 am:
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MorningThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 22, 2011 at 9:12 pm:
This is really nice. My family takes long car trips every summer and brought those memories foward. Good Job!
 
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OneofThemThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 22, 2011 at 7:15 pm:
Not gonna lie, rhyming poems don't really do it for me. It came off as a tad forced. However, it's completely relatable and I did enjoy it. Easy to picture, if you know what I mean.
 
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GirlWhoWroteThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 22, 2011 at 9:34 am:
Wow, this is good! I like how realistic it is, and how I can see things clearly in my head. And.... check out my work, please!!!
 
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Dec. 22, 2011 at 12:37 am:
It was really good!  Your rythm could have been slightly better, but the overall message was amazingly delivered:D
 
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ThroughTheseEyes said...
Dec. 11, 2011 at 4:05 pm:
This is really good!!! It brought me back to all the times I travled with my family! :) Love It!
 
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SpringMoon98This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 2, 2011 at 7:05 pm:
That was really awesome! I totally agree with the message.
 
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ElleNicole said...
Dec. 1, 2011 at 6:13 pm:
Nice job. Check out my stuff? Thanks!
 
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raindance72This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 30, 2011 at 6:40 pm:

Nostalgia anyone? BEAUTIOUS! (that's my special word, I rarely use it) Usually I've got a whole mouthful of constructive criticism but this poem was just great. Blew me away, really.

Also, I'd love if I could have some people check out my work and comment; I would love some critiques on my own work. Thank you! :)

And to the author....hope you don't plan on quittin' writing any time soon, because you really do have talent.

 
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jae6811 said...
Nov. 30, 2011 at 6:49 am:
that was beautiful good job
 
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Big k said...
Nov. 29, 2011 at 10:11 am:
I quite liked that poem. It reminds me of my younger years
 
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TheIntellectualOneThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 8, 2011 at 8:07 pm:
beautiful done to the last detail. you Josh should be proud of what you've done
 
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aurorairisThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 8, 2011 at 4:40 pm:

I totally agree! Very beautiful, relatable, and powerful! Great use of imagry!

Please comment on some of my poetry!

 
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Fia-fiaThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 8, 2011 at 4:40 pm:

This is a great point of view! It is really well written and i like how you explained your reasoning. Thank you

:)

 
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DakodaDawn16This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 8, 2011 at 12:28 pm:
i realy love the emotion that was put into this peom, it made me think back on my own trips
 
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teh_daly said...
Nov. 8, 2011 at 11:08 am:
speech less.....
 
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Natasha1994 said...
Oct. 24, 2011 at 1:13 pm:
i like your discription in your poem alot of details to back your main point up great job
 
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CameandgonesmartyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 17, 2011 at 8:39 pm:

very poetic 

i love how the poem has symbolism but it can act as though it is literal.

great job

 
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coyote.in.the.distance said...
Oct. 17, 2011 at 7:01 pm:
i have no words. that was so beautifull. i realy realy love it. so simple yet unique and amazing. I realy enjoyed reading it!Keep up the good work! : D
 
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Brian B. said...
Oct. 17, 2011 at 6:55 pm:
Pretty good poem
 
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Emily G. This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 17, 2011 at 3:50 pm:
this is amazing work! I felt as though it were really me in the poem! imagery was awesome
 
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GreenpawThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 17, 2011 at 1:35 am:
5/5 I really enjoyed it. I can actually relate to it, fun car rides :D. Check out my work everyone if you have a chance :D.
 
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Duckie430This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 25, 2011 at 7:01 pm:
good poem!!!
 
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AnniebooThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Sept. 25, 2011 at 1:25 pm:
I loved it. You gave great examples of why you thought that way. It was meaningful and sweet.
 
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dia.dreamerThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Sept. 3, 2011 at 5:52 am:

simple, meaningful, beautiful poem. I could really relate to it!! :) keep writing.

and could you all check out some of my work too? would love some feedback! :)

 
ArrowHeartThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Sept. 3, 2011 at 10:33 pm :
Sorry to advertize, beautiful piece, but my new piece is going to come out, Burned. This is my first time story, so please give me some feedback!
 
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Muh-ree-uh said...
Aug. 12, 2011 at 8:41 pm:
beautiful poem, it is very heartfelt and relates to much more than just a car ride, I absolutely love it! :) great job!!!!
 
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emilybwritesThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 12, 2011 at 8:26 pm:
i usually frind rhyming tough great job! can you and others please check out my poem "Forgotten Domain" and please comment? i would like some feedback from fellow writers
 
Muh-ree-uh replied...
Aug. 12, 2011 at 8:40 pm :
yes!  of course!  I'll look at your piece right now :)  and if anyone would like to give me some constructive criticism, I'm craving for it!  Please check out my poem "Shall I compare our love to an ocean?"
 
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Regs_the_ShortyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 12, 2011 at 10:46 am:
 I loved it! I read a comment that talked about rhyming and I had to go back and look and make sure there was rhyming, to my surprise there was but you made the rhyming so fluid.
 
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iHopeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 22, 2011 at 11:29 am:
i never thought of casual trips in this way...beautiful, i really understand and love it :)
 
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Saffy96This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 21, 2011 at 6:39 pm:
Wow - that was great, especially the flow of the words. Your rhyming skills are really good - the rhymes didn't feel forced or abrupt or anything. Well done!
 
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groomske said...
Jul. 21, 2011 at 3:56 pm:
I love this!!!!!!!!
 
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FlashlevitationThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 21, 2011 at 3:44 pm:
very well written, i love your style and character!
 
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laughqueen96This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 11, 2011 at 12:13 pm:
I love this. you're painting a picture in my head and I can really understsand it.
 
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Uga10This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 2, 2011 at 10:17 am:
Dabg, this is really good and I can relate.
 
Uga10This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jul. 2, 2011 at 10:18 am :
Dang* my bad typo
 
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RomeofreeJuliet said...
Jun. 29, 2011 at 10:04 pm:
Amaxing! :)
 
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