I Would Dance

By Willow55, Hudgins, VA

I didn't start out dancing
I started in the ruins,searching
nameless,hurting
But I knew
I would dance
It is what kept me going
I kept on keeping on
because I knew
I would dance
Even if it wasn't till the end
If it wasn't until heaven
no matter what
I would dance

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Willow55 said...
Oct. 1, 2012 at 4:16 pm:

Thanks Skyler :) . It means alot

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SkylerMorningstar said...
Sept. 30, 2012 at 5:23 pm:

awww i thought that was so sweet :)

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Willow55 said...
Sept. 26, 2012 at 1:45 pm:

My short story is now here! check it out and tell me what you think

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Willow55 said...
Sept. 25, 2012 at 6:09 pm:

Thanks! I am hoping more of my work gets published soon!

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Shannon311 said...
Sept. 25, 2012 at 5:39 pm:

I would love to see more of this! It was really good and it left me wanting to read more.

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Willow55 said...
Sept. 24, 2012 at 5:16 pm:

Thanks guys! I have the first chapter of a short story waiting to be approved, and some other stuff i'm thinking about submitting

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abbstar111us said...
Sept. 24, 2012 at 12:19 pm:

This is really good :D I'd like to see more :P

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Timpster said...
Sept. 23, 2012 at 4:18 pm:

Yeah a few grammar mistakes here and there, but other than that, really good! I wanna see more of your work :)

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Willow55 said...
Sept. 23, 2012 at 2:18 pm:

Thanks for the feedback. Since it is free verse, I focused on content but I see your point

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Writer_In_The_Dark said...
Sept. 23, 2012 at 1:58 pm:

I like it, but I'm an absolute grammer Nazi, and there were a few grammer issues, mainly with commas and the spaces (non-existent spaces in this case) after them.

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Willow55 said...
Nov. 18, 2011 at 12:31 pm:

tell me what you think!