I Would Dance

November 5, 2011
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I didn't start out dancing
I started in the ruins,searching
But I knew
I would dance
It is what kept me going
I kept on keeping on
because I knew
I would dance
Even if it wasn't till the end
If it wasn't until heaven
no matter what
I would dance

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Willow55 said...
Oct. 6, 2013 at 7:04 pm
Thanks @r_rachel98! And thanks for your opinion @A-Taller-Penumbra
A-Taller-Penumbra3043 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 6, 2013 at 12:31 pm
Once again, not a bad poem, but the grammar and rhythm are off. I know that it's supposed to be put in a monologue, but it seemed pretty dull and unremarkable at times. It's an alright poem with decent imagery, but work on it, okay? :P  3/5
r_rachel98 said...
Oct. 5, 2013 at 10:08 am
I really liked this!
Willow55 said...
Oct. 1, 2012 at 4:16 pm
Thanks Skyler :) . It means alot
SkylerMorningstar said...
Sept. 30, 2012 at 5:23 pm
awww i thought that was so sweet :)
Willow55 said...
Sept. 26, 2012 at 1:45 pm
My short story is now here! check it out and tell me what you think  
Willow55 said...
Sept. 25, 2012 at 6:09 pm
Thanks! I am hoping more of my work gets published soon!
Shannon311 said...
Sept. 25, 2012 at 5:39 pm
I would love to see more of this! It was really good and it left me wanting to read more.
Willow55 said...
Sept. 24, 2012 at 5:16 pm
Thanks guys! I have the first chapter of a short story waiting to be approved, and some other stuff i'm thinking about submitting
abbstar111us said...
Sept. 24, 2012 at 12:19 pm
This is really good :D I'd like to see more :P 
Timpster said...
Sept. 23, 2012 at 4:18 pm
Yeah a few grammar mistakes here and there, but other than that, really good! I wanna see more of your work :)
Willow55 said...
Sept. 23, 2012 at 2:18 pm
Thanks for the feedback. Since it is free verse, I focused on content but I see your point
Writer_In_The_Dark said...
Sept. 23, 2012 at 1:58 pm
I like it, but I'm an absolute grammer Nazi, and there were a few grammer issues, mainly with commas and the spaces (non-existent spaces in this case) after them.
Willow55 said...
Nov. 18, 2011 at 12:31 pm
tell me what you think!
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