September 25, 2011
By fearless.girl SILVER, Apex, North Carolina
fearless.girl SILVER, Apex, North Carolina
9 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Fear is only in our mind."

Even though I say I don’t,
I do.
Even though he lied,
I knew.
Even though I’m strong,
I’m weak.
Even though I’m loud,
I can’t speak.

I thought he was the one,
and to me he was great.
It was clearly meant to be;
something close to fate.

I believed every word
he ever spoke,
but I guess I was dreaming
when I finally awoke.

I wanted him forever,
I loved him so much.
I don’t care who knows anymore
because I miss his touch;
and the way we talked late at night
you would’ve sworn it was
love at first sight.

He left without a goodbye,
I didn’t know what else to do.
I guess I stopped trying
because I already knew.

I know we are done
And I will heal from this pain;
I’m just waiting for the sunshine
to come through this pouring rain.

The author's comments:
Every girl has her heart broken at least once. I thought I'd write about mine.

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on Jan. 3 2012 at 9:54 am
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Awesome composition. The emotions come out so cohesively through words.. Great job..

on Nov. 16 2011 at 11:28 pm
HanaMizz14 GOLD, Auburn, Washington
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This was really good.  I liked the style of your writing. I can really relate to this because I've recently gone through a pretty tough break up and this poem has inspired me to wait for everything to settle back down and just wait it out.

on Nov. 16 2011 at 10:16 pm
ShadowsAreSecurity BRONZE, Farmington, New Mexico
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I Love THIS!!!<3

on Nov. 16 2011 at 7:57 pm
RoselieaOak SILVER, Antioch, California
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"Nothing is impossible with God."

One word: Beautiful.

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