Chamber Of Secrets

November 11, 2011
By queennels17 PLATINUM, Wellington, Florida
queennels17 PLATINUM, Wellington, Florida
21 articles 8 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
The sun is out but it's still dark outside.


We hold our hands
In this summer night

The wind is blowing
Blowing love in our sight

We caress
and our watch our love progress.
I’ve never fell in love like this
I’ve told you before.

You make this seem easy
and for that I’m ecstatic

Our time is almost over
It’s time to spread apart
but it’s okay, the next day will start

One day, we will never have to go separate ways
Our days will last longer
Our love will grow stronger
And I we will always dodge our delays

It’s time to go
For now, Mon Cheri

We leave each other for the night
Everything feels right
My love for you is so bright
I go in complete bliss, like flying a kite

I hope you recognize the love I have
For you

To never grow apart
I’ll give you the key to my heart
As a start.


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on Nov. 25 2011 at 12:25 am
queennels17 PLATINUM, Wellington, Florida
21 articles 8 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
The sun is out but it's still dark outside.

Thank you, and I'll certainly check your work out. 

on Nov. 24 2011 at 5:18 pm
Wonderment DIAMOND, Scranton, Pennsylvania
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Aww this poem is so cute. I llike it. I think you capture the emoution of falling in love well.

on Nov. 14 2011 at 9:28 pm
queennels17 PLATINUM, Wellington, Florida
21 articles 8 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
The sun is out but it's still dark outside.

thanx for telling me hahah and I love harry potter too!!! 

on Nov. 14 2011 at 8:03 pm
callie15 BRONZE, North Plains, Oregon
3 articles 21 photos 424 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I dreamed I was a butterfly, flitting around in the sky; then I awoke. Now I wonder: Am I a man who dreamt of being a butterfly, or am I a butterfly dreaming that I am a man?"
-Chuang Tzu

"No man with a good car needs to be justified!"
-Wise Blood

Sorry, I meant the sixth line, the one that says this:

"and our watch our love progress."


on Nov. 14 2011 at 8:01 pm
callie15 BRONZE, North Plains, Oregon
3 articles 21 photos 424 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I dreamed I was a butterfly, flitting around in the sky; then I awoke. Now I wonder: Am I a man who dreamt of being a butterfly, or am I a butterfly dreaming that I am a man?"
-Chuang Tzu

"No man with a good car needs to be justified!"
-Wise Blood

Great poem, although you made a little typo on line 4. Still, it's lovely and has a lot of emotion to it, although I have to be honest. The only reason I decided to read this poem was because it shares the same title with the second Harry Potter book ;)

on Nov. 14 2011 at 4:13 pm
queennels17 PLATINUM, Wellington, Florida
21 articles 8 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
The sun is out but it's still dark outside.

thank you sooo much, this means a lot. and yeah i've read some of your stuff ! don't stop and keep writing ! your really good as well ! 

on Nov. 14 2011 at 2:24 pm
14MNKMizzu1 GOLD, Columbia, Missouri
19 articles 0 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
We dont read poetry becuase it's cute, we read poetry becuase we'r part of the human race- Dead Poet's Soceity

love it!!!!!! I got some poems on a similar topic I think you would like check my stuff out

 



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