Boy whose heart you stomped on

November 1, 2011
By , Hillsboro, OH
The snow swirls around me
And I see her
Looking like an angel
Snow falls around her elegantly
I walk to her and say ‘hello’
She turns to me and smiles
I am frozen, just staring
Because, I must admit
She’s so much prettier than you…

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14MNKMizzu1 said...
Nov. 14, 2011 at 2:30 pm
I realy love it!!!!!! please keep writing. I'm falling in love with your work. the "girl looking like an angel" I hope you told that she did :) so beautiful
140536 replied...
Nov. 14, 2011 at 5:11 pm
Oh, thank you! To be honest, I wasn't really expecting anyone to comment at all, but thanks so much. I'm gonna keep trying.
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