Boy whose heart you stomped on

November 1, 2011
By Anonymous

The snow swirls around me
And I see her
Looking like an angel
Snow falls around her elegantly
I walk to her and say ‘hello’
She turns to me and smiles
I am frozen, just staring
Because, I must admit
She’s so much prettier than you…

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NextGen GOLD said...
on Nov. 14 2011 at 5:11 pm
NextGen GOLD, Hillsboro, Ohio
17 articles 10 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Tragedy is when I cut my finger. Comedy is when you fall into an open sewer and die." - Mel Brooks

Oh, thank you! To be honest, I wasn't really expecting anyone to comment at all, but thanks so much. I'm gonna keep trying.

on Nov. 14 2011 at 2:30 pm
14MNKMizzu1 GOLD, Columbia, Missouri
19 articles 0 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
We dont read poetry becuase it's cute, we read poetry becuase we'r part of the human race- Dead Poet's Soceity

I realy love it!!!!!! please keep writing. I'm falling in love with your work. the "girl looking like an angel" I hope you told that she did :) so beautiful


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