Brightness In Shadows

November 1, 2011
By Purpl3Bu773rfly GOLD, Egg Harbor City, New Jersey
Purpl3Bu773rfly GOLD, Egg Harbor City, New Jersey
15 articles 6 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I love the rain, its like the sky is crying so I don't have to." ~PurpleButterfly19


Dream of the brightness in your eyes,
Dream of the shadows hidden in time.
Test the brightness of ascending stars,
Test the shadows of the passing weeks.
Imagine the brightness used to hide your fears,
Imagine the shadows found within true love.
Examine the brightness yet to be seen in your soul,
Examine the shadows holding to your unabiding heart.
Think of the brightness of determined minds,
Think of the shadows dwelling in unwilling friends.
Dispel the brightness of common coincidence,
Dispel the shadows manifesting in inevitability.
Brighter are the shadows of the Afternoon Morning,
Dusky is the brightness of the Nighttime Daybreak.


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on Nov. 28 2011 at 11:39 pm
HateKnuckle SILVER, Peru, New York
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Its not as good as the other one you posted that was similar but this one is also good. its probably 4 or 3 stars. Its too choppy and it doesnt flow as easily. Sometimes less is more as in fewer syllables. I do like the message and description and descriptive vocabulary.

on Nov. 28 2011 at 11:38 pm
Purpl3Bu773rfly GOLD, Egg Harbor City, New Jersey
15 articles 6 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I love the rain, its like the sky is crying so I don't have to." ~PurpleButterfly19

Thank You!!! Yeah, I like the idea of contrasting two similar things with the good and the bad, and some of the things I come up with are as you saw. :D

on Nov. 28 2011 at 11:35 pm
Purpl3Bu773rfly GOLD, Egg Harbor City, New Jersey
15 articles 6 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I love the rain, its like the sky is crying so I don't have to." ~PurpleButterfly19

Thank you!

on Nov. 28 2011 at 11:32 pm
no.name. PLATINUM, Ceres, California
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I love it. I like the way you have 2 lines in a row starting the same. Normally I wouldn't like it, but it fits here. 

on Nov. 24 2011 at 1:13 pm
lovelydarkpoet SILVER, Gladstone, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
be who you are because the ones that care dont matter and the ones matter dont care

thats really good i like it a lot


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