The Fear

October 31, 2011
By Mortimer-Micheals-Jacob-Joyce GOLD, Edgar, Wisconsin
Mortimer-Micheals-Jacob-Joyce GOLD, Edgar, Wisconsin
12 articles 0 photos 191 comments

Favorite Quote:
"And when I'm gone, just carry on, don't mourn
Rejoice every time you hear the sound of my voice
Just know that I'm looking down on you smiling
And I didn't feel a thing, So baby don't feel my pain
Just smile back"-Eminem


Cold fingers wrap
And continue to tap
On the inside of your soul.
Cold bands tighten
And continue to frighten
They won’t release you from their hold.
Shrill voices scream
And break into dreams
They say that you’ve been told;
Still it doesn’t seem
As life continues to team
That fear itself can be so cold.


The author's comments:
Short and sweet, this is basically an extended metaphor about fear.

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Tiggerlily14 said...
on Dec. 6 2011 at 7:16 pm
oh great, the busiest day of the week for me, two classes, church, and other school.  oh well. I'll find time, I always do find time to get away from school  :P  ttyl  :)

on Dec. 6 2011 at 7:10 pm
Mortimer-Micheals-Jacob-Joyce GOLD, Edgar, Wisconsin
12 articles 0 photos 191 comments

Favorite Quote:
"And when I'm gone, just carry on, don't mourn
Rejoice every time you hear the sound of my voice
Just know that I'm looking down on you smiling
And I didn't feel a thing, So baby don't feel my pain
Just smile back"-Eminem

Yep, talk to you tomorrow. :)

Tiggerlily14 said...
on Dec. 6 2011 at 7:07 pm
oh....ok, got the power point  :)  thanx

on Dec. 6 2011 at 7:05 pm
Mortimer-Micheals-Jacob-Joyce GOLD, Edgar, Wisconsin
12 articles 0 photos 191 comments

Favorite Quote:
"And when I'm gone, just carry on, don't mourn
Rejoice every time you hear the sound of my voice
Just know that I'm looking down on you smiling
And I didn't feel a thing, So baby don't feel my pain
Just smile back"-Eminem

I need to get off the computer, I'm emailing you that powerpoint you wanted.

Tiggerlily14 said...
on Dec. 6 2011 at 7:03 pm
haha  :P  why don't you just get on email and chat?  I'm bored.....(and i might call you, jkjk)

on Dec. 6 2011 at 7:02 pm
Mortimer-Micheals-Jacob-Joyce GOLD, Edgar, Wisconsin
12 articles 0 photos 191 comments

Favorite Quote:
"And when I'm gone, just carry on, don't mourn
Rejoice every time you hear the sound of my voice
Just know that I'm looking down on you smiling
And I didn't feel a thing, So baby don't feel my pain
Just smile back"-Eminem

Mhm, I gues that's ok, because I need more comments.

Tiggerlily14 said...
on Dec. 6 2011 at 7:00 pm
if you didn't notice, I'm a chatter box tonight.....  :P

on Dec. 6 2011 at 6:52 pm
Mortimer-Micheals-Jacob-Joyce GOLD, Edgar, Wisconsin
12 articles 0 photos 191 comments

Favorite Quote:
"And when I'm gone, just carry on, don't mourn
Rejoice every time you hear the sound of my voice
Just know that I'm looking down on you smiling
And I didn't feel a thing, So baby don't feel my pain
Just smile back"-Eminem

Yeah.......

on Dec. 6 2011 at 11:41 am
did you notice that I changed my screen name to what you called me once?  haha  i think it would be a funny nickname for me, and people who don't know what it's all about would get confused, like a lot of the people reading this.

on Dec. 6 2011 at 11:39 am
Mortimer-Micheals-Jacob-Joyce GOLD, Edgar, Wisconsin
12 articles 0 photos 191 comments

Favorite Quote:
"And when I'm gone, just carry on, don't mourn
Rejoice every time you hear the sound of my voice
Just know that I'm looking down on you smiling
And I didn't feel a thing, So baby don't feel my pain
Just smile back"-Eminem

Yeah, this counts as a comment, and it includes you. Lol, thanks. :)

on Dec. 5 2011 at 2:44 pm
does that include me?  just wondering.....and trying to comment...is this a comment?  sounds more like a debate going on in my head.......

on Dec. 5 2011 at 2:25 pm
Mortimer-Micheals-Jacob-Joyce GOLD, Edgar, Wisconsin
12 articles 0 photos 191 comments

Favorite Quote:
"And when I'm gone, just carry on, don't mourn
Rejoice every time you hear the sound of my voice
Just know that I'm looking down on you smiling
And I didn't feel a thing, So baby don't feel my pain
Just smile back"-Eminem

Yeah, 250 views! 5 stars, and now 22 comments.  This is one of my most popular pieces.  Thanks to all who read, commented and rated! :)

lol xD said...
on Nov. 29 2011 at 5:50 pm
that's because it's true  o.O

on Nov. 29 2011 at 4:47 pm
Mortimer-Micheals-Jacob-Joyce GOLD, Edgar, Wisconsin
12 articles 0 photos 191 comments

Favorite Quote:
"And when I'm gone, just carry on, don't mourn
Rejoice every time you hear the sound of my voice
Just know that I'm looking down on you smiling
And I didn't feel a thing, So baby don't feel my pain
Just smile back"-Eminem

Thanks.  A lot of people seem to think that...

on Nov. 29 2011 at 4:45 pm
no.name. PLATINUM, Ceres, California
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You're a good rhymer, I like it.

on Nov. 28 2011 at 8:30 pm

uhm...

du ist sehr welkommen  =)


on Nov. 28 2011 at 5:34 pm
Mortimer-Micheals-Jacob-Joyce GOLD, Edgar, Wisconsin
12 articles 0 photos 191 comments

Favorite Quote:
"And when I'm gone, just carry on, don't mourn
Rejoice every time you hear the sound of my voice
Just know that I'm looking down on you smiling
And I didn't feel a thing, So baby don't feel my pain
Just smile back"-Eminem

100 views, thanks everyone. :)

on Nov. 28 2011 at 5:30 pm
Mortimer-Micheals-Jacob-Joyce GOLD, Edgar, Wisconsin
12 articles 0 photos 191 comments

Favorite Quote:
"And when I'm gone, just carry on, don't mourn
Rejoice every time you hear the sound of my voice
Just know that I'm looking down on you smiling
And I didn't feel a thing, So baby don't feel my pain
Just smile back"-Eminem

Thanks, it's some of my best.

on Nov. 28 2011 at 5:21 pm
waterbendercarorain GOLD, Lilburn, Georgia
15 articles 9 photos 249 comments

Favorite Quote:
dont give up she will talk someday my friend made this quote she is really cool cause she understands about my sister
it starts with ONE to make a differerence!!! i learned this quote at a leadership camp

ohana means family no one gets left behind

this is amzing :)

on Nov. 16 2011 at 12:15 pm
RyanTyler PLATINUM, Windsor, Connecticut
21 articles 0 photos 94 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A myth is a religion in which no one no longer believes." James Feibleman

Your welcome.


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