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I thought I was your daffodil, petals of sunshine, a mist of dew, you told me I was beautiful.

Instead I am your dandelion, blown away without a thought, a passing wind, poof, I’m gone.





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kobie1kenobi said...
Nov. 14, 2011 at 9:20 am
This puts everything in a new light. It holds deep emotion and meaning and it certaintly makes you put things into perspective. Thank you for this peom, it has helped me view the world just a little bit differently.
 
bubbles.. said...
Nov. 14, 2011 at 6:47 am

i love this its like your a very fluent writer. this is definiatly amazing

:D

 
dbdaze said...
Nov. 13, 2011 at 8:16 pm
The fact that you wrote this in one minute reflects how strongly your emotions were at that time.  Your metaphors were "spot on".  Nice work!
 
clumsyteardropper said...
Nov. 13, 2011 at 11:21 am
wow. that was very well done :)  it's short, simple, and straight forward... i love it.  amazing job
 
sng1993 said...
Nov. 13, 2011 at 10:52 am
I title a lot of my poems in my favorite numbers but that's basically because I can't think of another title!
 
SanamSheriff said...
Nov. 13, 2011 at 6:32 am
This is really really beautiful, but out of curiosity, why is it titled seven?
 
TubaLady This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 12, 2011 at 3:25 pm
That's really pretty. I wrote a free verse titled "Seven", too. :) I haven't submitted it yet, though.
 
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