Reaper

November 4, 2011
By Signed_DK SILVER, Declo, Idaho
Signed_DK SILVER, Declo, Idaho
5 articles 1 photo 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
There is no line between genius and insanity, I erased it.

Violence isn't the answer, it's the solution.


The smell of smoke filled the air. He looked around trying to find the source.
Still intoxicated from the night before, he struggled to his feet.Then, he saw the crash.
Burning wreckage was spread out over the ground. What was left of his car was totaled. But then he saw what made him crawl on his knees and cry.
She was lying on the ground, hair covering her face, or what was left of it, her skin was gashed with six inch deep wounds. The wounds were already drained of blood.
He picked up her body and sat there and cried, even after the police and ambulances came he wouldn't let her go. His love was to great to let her go somewhere where he knew that he wouldn't be able to see her. Not anymore.
He raised his eyes to the sky and screamed, his mind replaying the crash over and over. "I am so sorry, I am so sorry!"


The author's comments:
Don't let the things of fun get in the way of letting you live your life to the fullest.

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on Nov. 29 2011 at 4:38 pm
Signed_DK SILVER, Declo, Idaho
5 articles 1 photo 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
There is no line between genius and insanity, I erased it.

Violence isn't the answer, it's the solution.

I know it sounds like a short story, I was thinking it did after it was already approved.

BluBliss GOLD said...
on Nov. 29 2011 at 9:57 am
BluBliss GOLD, New York, New York
14 articles 0 photos 161 comments

Favorite Quote:
Bella's love for Edward was like, "Omg. He's hot. He's mine because he sparkles. Now I'll brood the wholle book while I'm with him."

I like his cries at the end. I'd keep them that way, they're powerful. I do think it could be more descriptive- it sounds, now, like a short story than a poem.

on Nov. 22 2011 at 6:26 pm
Signed_DK SILVER, Declo, Idaho
5 articles 1 photo 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
There is no line between genius and insanity, I erased it.

Violence isn't the answer, it's the solution.

They love eachother im kinda sorry that it wasn't clear most of my stuff is

on Nov. 22 2011 at 6:02 pm
Kayla12w BRONZE, Clearfield, Utah
2 articles 1 photo 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
It's not Normal to be Normal.

I liked it, but I think it need to go into a bit more of detail, Who is she to him, I also want to know why he is sorry. please reply back.

Very good poem though, Very good

 



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