"young love"

November 6, 2011
By remembermeplz PLATINUM, Friend, Nebraska
remembermeplz PLATINUM, Friend, Nebraska
36 articles 10 photos 230 comments

Favorite Quote:
"when the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace" -- Jimi Hendrix


What is this
"Young love"
That wise people with wrinkles laugh about?

I can tell just by the look in their eyes,
It's amazing.

It's Christmas morning,everyday.
It's laying in the warm sun.
It's being so small,but finding that this
"young love"
can grow to be as big as
all the oceans.
And knowing that someday,
when you're 95.
You'll still love her,
like you're Young.


The author's comments:
ahhhhh
I haven't posted in foreverrr
so enjoyy
my not so good poetry

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on Oct. 6 2012 at 8:02 am
remembermeplz PLATINUM, Friend, Nebraska
36 articles 10 photos 230 comments

Favorite Quote:
"when the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace" -- Jimi Hendrix

=) thank you!

KateLA GOLD said...
on Apr. 18 2012 at 7:28 pm
KateLA GOLD, Everett, Washington
11 articles 20 photos 194 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don’t you find it Funny that after Monday(M) and Tuesday(T), the rest of the week says WTF?
-Unknown

 I really like the theme of this poem and I think you wrote it very well! 5/5!




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