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Violin's Tears

You feel the music,
Pounding through your soul,
Carrying you away,
Making you fly,
You’re souring,
You feel the beat of the spirit,
Like fuel for your bow,
You’re drifting on a cloud
Of heavenly sound,
It takes you away,
Suddenly everything is okay,
You forget your pain,
All of your mistakes,
Like it has set you free,
You smile as you find yourself near the end,
Though the song is over,
We can still pretend
That we feel as good as
We just did



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KatsDyingHorizonThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Sept. 4, 2012 at 8:01 pm:
Thank you very very much :)
 
 
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iCheetoThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 16, 2012 at 10:19 am:
I love this, this is exactly how music is supposed to make you feel. Reading this poem was like singing to my favorite song, very nice :)
 
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