write,feel,cry.....survive

November 6, 2011
By Bambi67 SILVER, Chicago, Illinois
Bambi67 SILVER, Chicago, Illinois
9 articles 1 photo 58 comments

Favorite Quote:
remember that the future comes one day at a time.
Dean Acheson


I may not be the best writer out there but I sure love to write.

I may not be the pretties’ girl you ever seem, probably not even close to being a beauty queen but I am sure I am beautiful just being me.
You can take my self-esteem and all you want from me

My hands, my paper, my pencil this is me.
I been broken before and use to never fight back but guess what. I change; I am not the same girl you left behind

Writing is all I ever want it to do and now I am doing it

I am sure I am not the best like you said but I am learning and in two languages and you can barely speak one

I am not saying this because I want you to feel bad but because I want you to know that I am happy just being me, accepting who I am and learning something new every day.
I am in the happiest moments in my life and not matter what you or anyone says about me I am still going to survive.

Because guess what….. I am a survival


The author's comments:
not matter what anyone says"believe in yourself"not matter how broken your heart may be??Clara??

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on Jan. 7 2012 at 10:24 pm
vetenari BRONZE, Birmingham, Alabama
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LOVE the title!

Bambi67 SILVER said...
on Nov. 17 2011 at 8:26 pm
Bambi67 SILVER, Chicago, Illinois
9 articles 1 photo 58 comments

Favorite Quote:
remember that the future comes one day at a time.
Dean Acheson

thank you very much

on Nov. 15 2011 at 5:40 pm
SpringRayyn PLATINUM, Lakeville, Minnesota
34 articles 2 photos 658 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't punish yourself," she heard her say again, but there would be punishment and pain, and there would be happiness too. That was writing."
--Markus Zusak, "The Book Thief"

A couple grammatical errors here and there, but overall I like the flow of it. It sounds so easy to speak out loud. I think if you continue to practice writing, then you'll soon create a style even more your own.

Bambi67 SILVER said...
on Nov. 13 2011 at 10:19 pm
Bambi67 SILVER, Chicago, Illinois
9 articles 1 photo 58 comments

Favorite Quote:
remember that the future comes one day at a time.
Dean Acheson

Thank you...

Bambi67 SILVER said...
on Nov. 13 2011 at 10:18 pm
Bambi67 SILVER, Chicago, Illinois
9 articles 1 photo 58 comments

Favorite Quote:
remember that the future comes one day at a time.
Dean Acheson

Thank you very much

on Nov. 13 2011 at 7:48 pm
ReadWriteBreathe PLATINUM, Pocatello, Idaho
24 articles 4 photos 114 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You have to consider the possibility that God does not like you" Tyler Durden Fight Club

I really like the poem. It's a really good concept. I love the ending, it's very inspiring. The only critisism I could give is that it doesn't flow very well and there are some errors. Other than that, this is really good.

on Nov. 13 2011 at 7:34 pm
VandalSpirit DIAMOND, Pleasant Prairie, Wisconsin
51 articles 9 photos 186 comments

Favorite Quote:
Yet this I call to mind and therefore I have hope: Because of Gods great love, we are not consumed. His compassion never fail. They are new every morning; great is your faithfulness.

I like the idea and concept of this. I think you should keep writing but if I were you I'd work a little on the rhythm and how you place the lines just to make the poem flow a little better.




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