I'm Sorry

By , Dayton, OH
I'm sorry I'll never be as good as you.

I'm sorry that you don't want me around.

I'm sorry that you don't care about me.

I'm sorry that you laugh at me like I don't belong.

I'm sorry that you don't see the real me.

I'm sorry that you will never be able to open your eyes.

I'm sorry that you will never be able to be like me.

I'm sorry that you don't want to be like me.

I'm sorry if you think I don't belong like you.

I'm sorry that you can't look on the bright side.

I'm sorry that you hate me.

I'm sorry that you have to deal with me.

I'm sorry.

I'm so sorry.





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mizzfrance said...
Nov. 10, 2011 at 2:51 pm
this almost brought tears to my eyes. fantabulistic
 
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Nov. 10, 2011 at 2:43 pm
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Isabelle B. said...
Nov. 9, 2011 at 4:39 pm
ok  that is so me like Ifeel  like that
 
RedFeather said...
Nov. 9, 2011 at 8:01 am
Great poem, and it's so true too. Though, it makes me feel sorry for always feeling sorry and never doing anything about it.
 
Lacie101 said...
Nov. 8, 2011 at 10:30 pm
i really like it. its so true. it really  makes me think about your words.they really are goood!i loved it
 
LoudDreamer said...
Nov. 8, 2011 at 12:37 pm
I like your use of parallelism, using the same basic phrase, it gives it some gravity. Somehow there is something in it that, toward the end, it makes me feel like I'm the sorry one.
 
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