To Discover Myself

October 23, 2011
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So sad
A lonely soul
A broken heart
Full of lies
Always wearing a mask
No one can know
Who I am
How I feel
What goes on inside my head
No one can know
Of all my wounds
Once covered in blood
Now hidden in scars
The thoughts I think
The feelings I feel
The many thought
Of how I would leave
Suicide
The feelings of sadness
I wander through the mysteries of myself
Getting lost at each question
Always hoping for a miracle
A way to get out
To finally find out
Who I really am.





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Wonderment said...
Dec. 15, 2011 at 3:29 pm
Its really good. You caputre emoutions well and its very realtable.
 
Wonderment said...
Dec. 15, 2011 at 3:28 pm
Its really good. Really relatbale and you capture emoutions well.
 
Matice said...
Dec. 15, 2011 at 3:23 pm

A lot of emotion in such a short piece. I loved it!

If you have a spare second, I'd love it if you would take a check out and rate/comment on some of my work. Particularly, my short story "Petals of Loyalty." :)

 
Eastep said...
Nov. 26, 2011 at 2:23 am

The second part of the poem seems much stronger than the first, but otherwise it's very good!

I think this has a good chance of making the front page!

 
Hikari. said...
Nov. 25, 2011 at 6:13 pm
Aaw :(.. but I like te ending. Good writing! its really emotional to the reader. Stay strong <3 *huggles*
 
LivingMYLife replied...
Nov. 25, 2011 at 6:24 pm
easier said than done but thank you *huggles* lol
 
Hikari. replied...
Nov. 25, 2011 at 6:31 pm
true, but you should keep telling yourself good things like, 'its gonna be ok.' I do that, and if Im crying, I'll stop, and start thinking of what Im thankful for and lucky to have
 
dbk1098 said...
Nov. 25, 2011 at 4:12 pm
Sooo deep. Love the emotion! It really shows the passion you have for ur piece!
 
LivingMYLife replied...
Nov. 25, 2011 at 4:32 pm
haha thank you. :)
 
Jennypig said...
Nov. 23, 2011 at 7:13 pm
this is really deep...like by the end i was like =O but i like it =)
 
LivingMYLife replied...
Nov. 23, 2011 at 7:39 pm
thank you :) i actually like this one too
 
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