To Discover Myself

October 23, 2011
By RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
32 articles 1 photo 218 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It." ~some book that i don't remember the name of

"Live Life Like There's No Yesterday" ~ random billboard

"If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You" ` ~ Kerli?


So sad
A lonely soul
A broken heart
Full of lies
Always wearing a mask
No one can know
Who I am
How I feel
What goes on inside my head
No one can know
Of all my wounds
Once covered in blood
Now hidden in scars
The thoughts I think
The feelings I feel
The many thought
Of how I would leave
Suicide
The feelings of sadness
I wander through the mysteries of myself
Getting lost at each question
Always hoping for a miracle
A way to get out
To finally find out
Who I really am.



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on Dec. 15 2011 at 3:29 pm
Wonderment DIAMOND, Scranton, Pennsylvania
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Its really good. You caputre emoutions well and its very realtable.

on Dec. 15 2011 at 3:28 pm
Wonderment DIAMOND, Scranton, Pennsylvania
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Its really good. Really relatbale and you capture emoutions well.

Matice BRONZE said...
on Dec. 15 2011 at 3:23 pm
Matice BRONZE, O&#39Fallon, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"Maria, first, let me say that you will most certainly regret it. Second, let me say that I'm in."-Smith

A lot of emotion in such a short piece. I loved it!

If you have a spare second, I'd love it if you would take a check out and rate/comment on some of my work. Particularly, my short story "Petals of Loyalty." :)


Lovejuice GOLD said...
on Nov. 26 2011 at 2:23 am
Lovejuice GOLD,
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The second part of the poem seems much stronger than the first, but otherwise it's very good!

I think this has a good chance of making the front page!


on Nov. 25 2011 at 6:31 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
1 article 0 photos 1985 comments

Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

true, but you should keep telling yourself good things like, 'its gonna be ok.' I do that, and if Im crying, I'll stop, and start thinking of what Im thankful for and lucky to have

on Nov. 25 2011 at 6:24 pm
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
32 articles 1 photo 218 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It." ~some book that i don't remember the name of

"Live Life Like There's No Yesterday" ~ random billboard

"If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You" ` ~ Kerli?

easier said than done but thank you *huggles* lol

on Nov. 25 2011 at 6:13 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
1 article 0 photos 1985 comments

Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

Aaw :(.. but I like te ending. Good writing! its really emotional to the reader. Stay strong <3 *huggles*

on Nov. 25 2011 at 4:32 pm
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
32 articles 1 photo 218 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It." ~some book that i don't remember the name of

"Live Life Like There's No Yesterday" ~ random billboard

"If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You" ` ~ Kerli?

haha thank you. :)

on Nov. 25 2011 at 4:12 pm
dbk1098 PLATINUM, Rockville, Maryland
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Sooo deep. Love the emotion! It really shows the passion you have for ur piece!

on Nov. 23 2011 at 7:39 pm
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
32 articles 1 photo 218 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It." ~some book that i don't remember the name of

"Live Life Like There's No Yesterday" ~ random billboard

"If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You" ` ~ Kerli?

thank you :) i actually like this one too

Jennypig GOLD said...
on Nov. 23 2011 at 7:13 pm
Jennypig GOLD, Winslow, Maine
13 articles 0 photos 63 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get living or get dying -Stepen King
We are a little weird and life is a little weird, so when we find someone who's weirdness is compatible with our own, we fall in a mutual weirdness and call it love. -Dr. Seuss

this is really deep...like by the end i was like =O but i like it =)




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