every time

October 26, 2011
By IMme2 BRONZE, Farmington, New Mexico
IMme2 BRONZE, Farmington, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
just be yourself not some one your not.
- unknown


Every time I look at you my heart beats a little faster
my hearts races every time you touch my arm in that comforting way of yours
but every time I see you with her in your arms I think what do I have to do to get you to hold ME like that,
my face blushes every time you graze your hand on my cheek, my face flushes with anger every time she knows I'm looking and kisses you to make me mad. Every time I think...
why not me?


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my first poem!! rate and comment please!!

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IMme2 BRONZE said...
on Dec. 5 2011 at 11:11 am
IMme2 BRONZE, Farmington, New Mexico
2 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
just be yourself not some one your not.
- unknown

thank you  soo much!!!!!

on Dec. 2 2011 at 8:22 pm
StrangeJade PLATINUM, Relative Obscurity, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Life is so beautiful that death has fallen in love with it." - Life of Pi

Very relatable, particularly for me. T_T Hehe. Quite good for a first poem. I would work on experimenting a bit more with things like line breaks (making the lines shorter and punchier). But keep writing, and keep practicing! ^-^

IMme2 BRONZE said...
on Nov. 25 2011 at 11:53 pm
IMme2 BRONZE, Farmington, New Mexico
2 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
just be yourself not some one your not.
- unknown

it would be nice someone could comment! it would be truly appreciated!


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