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Every time I look at you my heart beats a little faster
my hearts races every time you touch my arm in that comforting way of yours
but every time I see you with her in your arms I think what do I have to do to get you to hold ME like that,
my face blushes every time you graze your hand on my cheek, my face flushes with anger every time she knows I'm looking and kisses you to make me mad. Every time I think...
why not me?




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StrangeJadeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 2, 2011 at 8:22 pm:
Very relatable, particularly for me. T_T Hehe. Quite good for a first poem. I would work on experimenting a bit more with things like line breaks (making the lines shorter and punchier). But keep writing, and keep practicing! ^-^
 
IMunloved replied...
Dec. 5, 2011 at 11:11 am :
thank you  soo much!!!!!
 
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IMloved said...
Nov. 25, 2011 at 11:53 pm:
it would be nice someone could comment! it would be truly appreciated!
 
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