The Hunter And The Hunted

October 26, 2011
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The alley was dark
The alley was silent
The girl in the alley
Hoped for nothing violent.

She heard the croak of a raven
And looked around to see
But she saw nothing but darkness
And irregular shaped shadows looming free.

A light went out over her head
And she picked up her pace
She kept looking sideways
Getting out of the alley seemed like a race.

The raven looked at the girl
Who was hurrying down the street
And thought "She's mine.
And I'll not let her out of my sight
Till I decide to dine."

The girl had gotten out of the alley
Into the city's light
"I'm safe here" she thought
And started towards the house on the right.

She reached her house
And went into her room
Little did she know
What waited for her was doom.

She started listening to music
And took a bath with foam
But what she didn't realize was
That the raven had followed her home.

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Muzee3 said...
Jan. 8, 2012 at 5:14 am
WOAH! CrEePy! nicely written with a set of beautiful lines! ITs really true! NO one is safe!
tonite replied...
Jan. 8, 2012 at 5:18 am
i wanted it to be creepy.....;P
Muzee3 replied...
Jan. 8, 2012 at 5:28 am
yah thats great! it will be helpful at times, ryt TONITE?
tonite replied...
Jan. 8, 2012 at 5:31 am
of course it will ....*wink*
irishlass317 said...
Nov. 12, 2011 at 4:40 pm
wow, this is reaaaaaally good!!! it reminds me of edgar allen poe!!!!! keep up the great work!!!!!!!
Basketball23 said...
Nov. 7, 2011 at 3:03 pm
Very eerie..........:/ LOVE IT!!!!
tonite replied...
Nov. 9, 2011 at 12:11 am
thank you XD
cookiegirl said...
Nov. 4, 2011 at 12:00 pm
This poem is scary. It's well written:). Keep it up.
tonite replied...
Nov. 4, 2011 at 12:25 pm
thanks!!!!!!!!!!!! Boo!!LOL
TanazMasaba This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 4, 2011 at 4:22 am
gives me the chills every time i read it..........btw are you going to post that story of yours too?
tonite replied...
Nov. 4, 2011 at 5:20 am
im glad i spook you.......and yes i will post it
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