Awakening Me

October 23, 2011
By livelaughlove96 BRONZE, Cary, North Carolina
livelaughlove96 BRONZE, Cary, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"Life is not about waiting for the storm to pass, its about learning how to dance in the rain."


Tired; out of breath. My knees collapsed; my heart gave out. I fell to the floor. Suddenly all the pain was gone. The numbness engulfed my body into a comfortable darkness. The only thing I could feel was the cold tile floor against my cheek. I didn’t know how long I had been lying there, or even cared, before I saw your crystal eyes gazing my way. It scared me. I was so accustomed to feeling nothing. Not open to feeling anything, and if I were to feel this, I would become vulnerable again. But the moment your fingertips touched my skin, a jolt of electricity made me feel something. Then it was like nothing was real, except for the look in your eyes. When you held me I felt a rush. When you kissed me it was like I was brought back to life. Like a newborn child, I felt so alive. Thank you for awaking me.



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on Nov. 2 2011 at 7:21 pm
livelaughlove96 BRONZE, Cary, North Carolina
2 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life is not about waiting for the storm to pass, its about learning how to dance in the rain."

Thank you smiler:)

on Nov. 2 2011 at 1:38 pm
Mynameislindsayy SILVER, Seattle, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"I'd rather just except who I am, what's the use of trying to change?"

Love it! It made me think..




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