Blank papper .

October 25, 2011
By classof20142121 GOLD, Torrington, Wyoming
classof20142121 GOLD, Torrington, Wyoming
12 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
You laugh because I am different ,but I laugh because you are all the same .


I set there with a pencil in my right had and a piece of paper in front of me . The blank whiteness of the paper haunts me . No thoughts written in ink ,no streams of words in my head .Where did the thoughts go did they leave with you? I don't know how this could happen. One day my head is full the next my thoughts are gone when you were hear with me my thoughts and feelings seemed so clear but now they see like a foggy mess. I sit there pencil in had and piece of paper in the other . I drop the pencil on the cold floor and crumble up the paper and toss it in the trash .The blank page no longer haunts me its gone now just like you.


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This is for my ex it seem like i cant write anything anymore

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on Dec. 7 2011 at 11:56 am
classof20142121 GOLD, Torrington, Wyoming
12 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
You laugh because I am different ,but I laugh because you are all the same .

Thanks for  comment

 


on Dec. 7 2011 at 9:07 am
Helena_Noel BRONZE, Burnt Hills, New York
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“I'd rather see a sermon than hear one any day; I'd rather one should walk with me than merely tell the way: The eye's a better pupil and more willing than the ear, fine counsel is confusing, but example's always clear.” -Edgar Guest

Good work, I think you should edit it into stanzas though, the thing about free verse is that the way it is typically cut imitates human speech, so that you can see the voice of the person. Like so:

 

It is not that hard to cut it into stanzas,
all you need to do
is use that enter key.
I takes only a second,
And can make a beautifully written work
Look
beautiful,
It can make your work
Have flow,
It can draw your readers in,
Draw them into its current,
Pull
Them into its emotions.
And thats why
We use stanzas.

 

Your work is beautifully written though. I like it, four stars.


on Nov. 23 2011 at 8:52 am
poetrylyrics BRONZE, Helena, Arkansas
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1)I will be grateful in all circumstances.
2)The measure of a life, after all, is not its duration, but its donation

great job i spelled it wrong

on Nov. 23 2011 at 8:52 am
poetrylyrics BRONZE, Helena, Arkansas
1 article 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
1)I will be grateful in all circumstances.
2)The measure of a life, after all, is not its duration, but its donation

Great Jop. Keep on writing. : )

on Nov. 14 2011 at 4:34 pm
Brokenness_is_Beautiful SILVER, Independece, Louisiana
6 articles 3 photos 77 comments

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Life is so ironic to understand fully, it takes sadness to know what is happiness. noise to distinguish silent and a broken heart to find true love.

This is really good. Doesn't it just suck when your inspiration leaves! Seems like it inspired you to write a nice peice of work though. Great job.

on Nov. 14 2011 at 11:33 am
classof20142121 GOLD, Torrington, Wyoming
12 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
You laugh because I am different ,but I laugh because you are all the same .

Thanks  and  yes I  know  i cant  spell

on Nov. 8 2011 at 6:44 pm
ReadWriteBreathe PLATINUM, Pocatello, Idaho
24 articles 4 photos 114 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You have to consider the possibility that God does not like you" Tyler Durden Fight Club

This is really good. I love the concept of it, very original. There are a lot of spelling mistakes though. Other than that. Good job.


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