I Do..

October 25, 2011
By Wonderment DIAMOND, Scranton, Pennsylvania
Wonderment DIAMOND, Scranton, Pennsylvania
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The laughter rings in my ears.
The smile is pasted on my face,
forever real and forever fake.
I know that you think that I don't see,
that I don't know,
that I don't understand,
but I do.
I see how easily replaced I am,
I know how someone else can slide into my spot,
I understand that they are more welcome,
than me.
I do,
see.
I do,
know.
I do,
understand.
So while the laughter rings in my ears,
while the smile stays plastered on my face,
I see,
I know,
and,
I understand,
I do.



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on Apr. 5 2012 at 11:38 pm
Simply_Ciara GOLD, Hopkinsville, Kentucky
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Very deep and nice use of repetition it puts more emphasis on how you felt. One of my favorites

on Apr. 5 2012 at 9:34 pm
_ella_herondale BRONZE, San Diego, California
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Favorite Quote:
"...If the Thames that ran beside them...recalled a night where the moon shone as brightly as a shilling on the same boy and girl... and thought to themselves, 'at last, the wheel comes full circle,' they kept their silence."

PS really srry about all the misspelled stuff in my last comment. I was typing ver quickly!

on Apr. 5 2012 at 9:32 pm
_ella_herondale BRONZE, San Diego, California
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Favorite Quote:
"...If the Thames that ran beside them...recalled a night where the moon shone as brightly as a shilling on the same boy and girl... and thought to themselves, 'at last, the wheel comes full circle,' they kept their silence."

AMAZING. Stunning. I love repetion, so this was perfect. I wanted to quote part of it, to show i liked that part especially, but i wouldve had to paste the entire poem. I like the emotional portrayl. Very very very nice! this is absolutley goung to be in my favorites!


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