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I Do..

The laughter rings in my ears.
The smile is pasted on my face,
forever real and forever fake.
I know that you think that I don't see,
that I don't know,
that I don't understand,
but I do.
I see how easily replaced I am,
I know how someone else can slide into my spot,
I understand that they are more welcome,
than me.
I do,
see.
I do,
know.
I do,
understand.
So while the laughter rings in my ears,
while the smile stays plastered on my face,
I see,
I know,
and,
I understand,
I do.



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Simply Ciara said...
Apr. 5, 2012 at 11:38 pm:
Very deep and nice use of repetition it puts more emphasis on how you felt. One of my favorites
 
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SilverSunThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 5, 2012 at 9:32 pm:
AMAZING. Stunning. I love repetion, so this was perfect. I wanted to quote part of it, to show i liked that part especially, but i wouldve had to paste the entire poem. I like the emotional portrayl. Very very very nice! this is absolutley goung to be in my favorites!
 
SilverSunThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 5, 2012 at 9:34 pm :
PS really srry about all the misspelled stuff in my last comment. I was typing ver quickly!
 
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