How white the pages seem!
Like an endless void,
They seem to stretch on and on.
A slash of darkness,
And the book starts.
Like an endless void,
They seem to stretch on and on.
A slash of darkness,
And the book starts.
Fayrouz
I like the cheer and imagery in the beginning. I personally thought it was kind of short, like it needs a line or two more, but it's a very captivating and cozy piece for sure. Good luck and keep writing!
SamiLouI love the symbolism "A slash of darkness and the book starts" good job!
Angel_B
FreedomIsMyVirtueI like the concept and creativity of this poem. I like how it can be interpreted differently. Good job on this...
BrokenBreeIt's truly different, original! I love how simple it is. Very nice(:
dark_armor1too be honest i love the concept of the poem! great job extremely creative ;)
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