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How white the pages seem!
Like an endless void,
They seem to stretch on and on.
A slash of darkness,
And the book starts.



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Fayrouz This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 14, 2011 at 5:03 pm:
I like the cheer and imagery in the beginning. I personally thought it was kind of short, like it needs a line or two more, but it's a very captivating and cozy piece for sure. Good luck and keep writing!
 
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SamiLou said...
Nov. 14, 2011 at 12:20 pm:
I love the symbolism "A slash of darkness and the book starts" good job!
 
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Angel_B said...
Nov. 3, 2011 at 8:33 am:
This is a great poem!!
 
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FreedomIsMyVirtue said...
Nov. 2, 2011 at 10:14 pm:
I like the concept and creativity of this poem. I like how it can be interpreted differently. Good job on this...
 
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BrokenBree said...
Nov. 2, 2011 at 7:31 pm:
It's truly different, original! I love how simple it is. Very nice(:
 
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dark_armor1 said...
Nov. 2, 2011 at 6:23 pm:
too be honest i love the concept of the poem! great job extremely creative ;)
 
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