October 22, 2011
How white the pages seem!
Like an endless void,
They seem to stretch on and on.
A slash of darkness,
And the book starts.

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Fayrouz This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 14, 2011 at 5:03 pm
I like the cheer and imagery in the beginning. I personally thought it was kind of short, like it needs a line or two more, but it's a very captivating and cozy piece for sure. Good luck and keep writing!
SamiLou said...
Nov. 14, 2011 at 12:20 pm
I love the symbolism "A slash of darkness and the book starts" good job!
Angel_B said...
Nov. 3, 2011 at 8:33 am
This is a great poem!!
FreedomIsMyVirtue said...
Nov. 2, 2011 at 10:14 pm
I like the concept and creativity of this poem. I like how it can be interpreted differently. Good job on this...
BrokenBree said...
Nov. 2, 2011 at 7:31 pm
It's truly different, original! I love how simple it is. Very nice(:
dark_armor1This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 2, 2011 at 6:23 pm
too be honest i love the concept of the poem! great job extremely creative ;)
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