What's life when your living In fear

October 23, 2011
By Dreammer GOLD, Montrose, Pennsylvania
Dreammer GOLD, Montrose, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Love is like quicksand the further you fall the harder it is to get out


I force a smile on my face, I fake my happiness so no one will see the truth,if I smile I can't cry and you'll never relies I hate myself. I'm afraid of this world and what it will do to me I can't control it. On the outside I may look strong but on the inside I'm torn  into pieces, every little piece represents the past. All those moments I've felt alone. You don't understand how every single word you've ever said rings In my ear. I refuse to turn off my music; you hate it but you don know why. As soon as I turn the music off all I hear is my thoughts, they could eat me alive if I let them. I beg them to stop but there evil. All those nights with no sleep there's no stopping it this is who I am . But is it really who I need to be Or is it who I was? It's the simple things In life that scares me the most , but what is life when your living In fear?


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on Oct. 20 2013 at 4:23 am
ToPonJah DIAMOND, San Diego, California
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Favorite Quote:
"So shines a good deed , in a weary world." -William Shakespeare
"I don't know..." -Bill Cosby
"STOMP, STOMP, SLAM!!!" -George Lopez

I really enjoy your writings Dreammer. I'd for you to know that they make a difference in my life.

on Jul. 6 2012 at 6:34 pm
ToPonJah DIAMOND, San Diego, California
50 articles 0 photos 86 comments

Favorite Quote:
"So shines a good deed , in a weary world." -William Shakespeare
"I don't know..." -Bill Cosby
"STOMP, STOMP, SLAM!!!" -George Lopez

Hello,Dreammer! I found your work. I enjoyed this. I agree that more feeling could have been surged through!

on Jan. 16 2012 at 10:00 am
Angeleyes12 SILVER, Hatfield, Pennsylvania
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It was a good poem . One suggestion i have is change it from paragragh form into lines and stanzas. It helps a reader know when to pause and can have more impact. Keep up the good work and keep writing :) (can you read and check some of my work? Thanks!)

Dreammer GOLD said...
on Nov. 15 2011 at 8:40 pm
Dreammer GOLD, Montrose, Pennsylvania
19 articles 0 photos 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love is like quicksand the further you fall the harder it is to get out

Apsolutly :)

Dreammer GOLD said...
on Nov. 15 2011 at 8:37 pm
Dreammer GOLD, Montrose, Pennsylvania
19 articles 0 photos 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love is like quicksand the further you fall the harder it is to get out

Apsolutly :)

taylor1226 said...
on Nov. 15 2011 at 8:30 pm
taylor1226, Alexandria, Virginia
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grrs.

well written.I can relate.if you could check out some of my work.(:

on Nov. 15 2011 at 7:47 am
Chibi-Alexis PLATINUM, Haw River, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"A penny for my thoughts, No no, I sell em for a dollar, They're worth so much more, After I'm a gonner, And maybe then you'll hear the words I been singin, Funny when you're dead how people start listenin."
The Band Perry
If I Die Young

Wow, this is exactly how I see things most of the time!  You are a really good writer!

on Nov. 12 2011 at 1:12 pm
MarieLouiseA SILVER, Newmarket, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Nothing's Impossible, The world is your dream.
In your eyes, the sky's a different blue.

This is brilliant! its how i think of life, like most days im just putting on a mask of who everyone wants me to be :/ This is great! Keep it up!

on Nov. 10 2011 at 6:39 am
redneck,girl PLATINUM, Fowler, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
ooo Hot boy.....but u have a bf.........you can look just cant touch.
~Mom

i love it...that is exactly what i think everyday here....i cant wait to get out




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