Am I All Alone?

October 23, 2011
May I vanish
Into the night?
Where there is not a soul
In sight.

Maybe I’ll finally find,
A place with a gleaming white light.

As always.
Solemn as can be,
Is someone willing,
To remove me from
My misery?

I see you in the distance.
Not a step you move.
If no one can save me
What more do I have to lose?

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Justsomegirlwhoisalwaysthere said...
Nov. 25, 2011 at 7:19 pm
I loved it! keep writting plese
Goddess replied...
Dec. 21, 2011 at 1:40 pm
YOur work is amazing. Please keep on writing.
ReadWriteBreathe said...
Oct. 31, 2011 at 10:05 pm
I like this one too. It's so honest and true. I love how you say 'May I vanish Into the night? Where there is not a soul In sight" Really good writing.
Br33na replied...
Nov. 3, 2011 at 11:22 pm
amazeing !!!!! :)))))))
Ellabell replied...
Nov. 12, 2011 at 6:48 pm
the last stanza is the best.
sunshine7223 replied...
Nov. 26, 2011 at 9:46 am
I love this poem! This one is super good. :) My favorite of yours so far. I love how it's short, but says so much. Not too many people can do that. Your one of the few extremely talented ones. :))
BrokenBree replied...
Nov. 26, 2011 at 1:38 pm
Sunshine than means so much! Thanks a lot!
moomoocow replied...
Nov. 29, 2011 at 7:09 pm
this is really good!!!! I love it!
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