Knives

October 23, 2011
By JonathanVondrasek DIAMOND, Oak Park, Illinois
JonathanVondrasek DIAMOND, Oak Park, Illinois
58 articles 7 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
" CONTAINS ODOR-FIGHTING "ATOMIC-ROBOTS" THAT "SHOOT LASERS" AT YOUR "STENCH MONSTERS" AND REPLACES THEM WITH FRESH, CLEAN. MASCULINE "SCENT ELVES"." - Old Spice deodorant


Serrated blades never felt so thin,
remember paper-cuts with a odd grin.
So this one cuts,
and it actually hurts.
With a chilling touch,
pain grabs the clutch.
This is impossible,
its sent me to the hospital!
Why is it so different.
Sharpness? Force? Or emotion?
Feelings morph into what we do,
and they ask why do we feel so blue?
But the knives, never made me thrive.
So what sinks into are minds,
ignoring thing we must learn to find.
So are we, dust in the air?
Burning memories, and taring photos.
Wonder why I made such a phantom,
Half of them only care, cause they think I'm handsome.
Ex, oh,ex, oh, we love you crows!


The author's comments:
I thought about people who had bad pasts, and how everyone around them tries to help them.

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on Dec. 29 2011 at 5:32 pm
JonathanVondrasek DIAMOND, Oak Park, Illinois
58 articles 7 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
" CONTAINS ODOR-FIGHTING "ATOMIC-ROBOTS" THAT "SHOOT LASERS" AT YOUR "STENCH MONSTERS" AND REPLACES THEM WITH FRESH, CLEAN. MASCULINE "SCENT ELVES"." - Old Spice deodorant

Thank you so much! I will never stop writing, heheh. :)

on Dec. 29 2011 at 4:46 pm
OneProzacADay PLATINUM, State College, Pennsylvania
37 articles 0 photos 58 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You are the universe expressing itself as human for a little while." -Eckhart Tolle

there were a few typos and grammar mistakes that were a little confusing, but this is beautifully written, creating a vivid picture! I couldn't believe no one had commented on it yet! keep writing :)


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