Who I've Become

October 27, 2011
By wicked13 GOLD, North Pekin, Illinois
wicked13 GOLD, North Pekin, Illinois
11 articles 1 photo 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
"No one can make you feel inferior without your permission." -Eleanoor Roosevelt


The darkness sets in
It's closing I can't breathe
Light reaches out
I miss its grasp
I'm flung into the spiral
downward I'm dizzy
Just one more
that's all I'll need
I appear happy and fine
I'm scared underneath
Nothing to love
No way to feel
I'm numb feel the ice
Just another one
It's fine
I'll be okay
Tomorrow will still come
even when I'm gone
to early in life
I've doomed this heart
this body, this mind
I'm stuck in this fog
never again to see light
I'm scared of the future
that is forever to be mine
Look in the mirror
this is who I've become
Now it's my life


The author's comments:
When I wrote this I just took everything i was feeling and spilled it out onto the paper.

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wicked13 GOLD said...
on Oct. 30 2011 at 5:45 pm
wicked13 GOLD, North Pekin, Illinois
11 articles 1 photo 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
"No one can make you feel inferior without your permission." -Eleanoor Roosevelt

thanks for your feedback guys. keep checking my page i have a few more things pending approval

on Oct. 30 2011 at 1:08 pm
Dr.GuessWhat GOLD, Romeo, Michigan
11 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don''t let anyone else define who YOU are. Be Original! Be Unique! Be You!
Follow me on twitter! LivyJoy144 I don't post lame things bout me day. More like fun quotes=)

pft who cares about the grammer lol potery should be about the words, not how they are spelled. i think its beautiful. and i agree with everything else you said lexie. and just so you dont hate me, im only putting my two-sence in, i respect your comment lol

check out my work ? =)

Lexie96 GOLD said...
on Oct. 30 2011 at 11:48 am
Lexie96 GOLD, Havana, Illinois
11 articles 0 photos 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
Now Cinderella don't you go to sleep, it's such a bitter form of refuge, oh don't you know the kingdom's under siege, and everbody needs you. - The Killers

This is pretty good, the only thing I noticed was that you used the wrong form of to; it should have been too. Other than that good job! Think you could check out my work sometime?

 



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