YOUNG LOVE

October 27, 2011
By THATGIRLX3 BRONZE, Brooklyn, New York
THATGIRLX3 BRONZE, Brooklyn, New York
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You tell me you love me.
Then you make me feel like you hate me.
you tell me i make you happy.
then you make me feel like i make you miserable.
you tell me i’m the best thing you ever had.
but you act like you can do better.
You say you wanna be with me forever.
But you don’t know if were going far.
Why,
Why do i stay?
I’ve given up trying to answer that question.
Maybe my heart will lose feelings and I’ll grow strong.
but right now i’m nothing but a weak, naive fool in your arms.
They all talk say im stupid for loving you.
but i dont care what they say.
i dont care how stupid i look.
your all i want.
i guess you can say im a fool for love,
that imma helpless romantic.
ut everything i do , i do it for you and only you
im in loe for the first time and i wont give it up for anyone else.
i love you
<3

The author's comments:
Inspired by my actual relationship with my boyfriend of 11months

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KCayla GOLD said...
on Oct. 31 2011 at 6:05 am
KCayla GOLD, Stillwater, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"I brought a cupcake, and I brought Apollo" - My Best friend, implying that I was like Apollo :D

I really like this. It really reminds me of my bestfriend and her boyfriend. :D


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