Come out

October 17, 2011
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In my head you're always there,
I walk around hoping to feel your stare.
But you're never there, you never have been.
Don't you care?
You're a mystery, you're a ghost. Come out, come out.
You're my dad, you are part of me.
How am i to be?
You're supposed to love me, and protect me from bad.
Its like a game of hide and Seek,
I have to search; i hope you don't cheat.
You're not here, You're not there.
Come out if you care.

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Malia said...
May 24, 2012 at 2:42 pm
In response to your comment to read your poem: I really love your rhyming, and as the person below said, hwo you concealed who you are talking about.
IMAdreamerThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 6, 2012 at 7:29 pm
I like the concealment of who u r talking about in the beginning, and then the surprise of who your talking about. Well written, nice job!
illusions replied...
Apr. 11, 2012 at 8:44 am
Thank you so much
Devils.Angel said...
Mar. 16, 2012 at 2:33 pm
I like how at the begining it feels likie your talking about your like ex-boy friend and then at the end your talking about your dad. i like how you care about him and then your dad really doesnt seem to care about you.
illusions said...
Feb. 22, 2012 at 3:17 pm
thank you all for your comments
PoetryAngel14 said...
Feb. 16, 2012 at 9:52 pm
I can sort of relate to it. Very deep and emotional. I, too, can feel the speaker's confusion. Great work :D
SmartTart said...
Dec. 23, 2011 at 11:09 am
I like it . I can relate to it 2. Made me think.
BlackPhoenix said...
Dec. 20, 2011 at 3:25 pm
i like the braking rhyme sceme, when you hit the words that do rhyme it makes them ring in you head, quite moving 
SpringMoon98 said...
Dec. 20, 2011 at 3:03 pm
I like the rhymes and I think this is a nice poem
illusions said...
Dec. 5, 2011 at 2:24 pm
Thank you so much
ReadWriteBreathe said...
Dec. 2, 2011 at 6:53 pm
I love this. I can really relate to it and I can feel the emotion you put into it. Great job.
Goddess said...
Dec. 2, 2011 at 4:54 pm
such a beautiful poem. i feel alot of emotions from it
illusions replied...
Dec. 5, 2011 at 2:23 pm
wow thanxz
petleavitt said...
Nov. 16, 2011 at 2:21 pm
thank you!!!!!!!!
Risible said...
Nov. 5, 2011 at 3:15 pm
I feel your confusion and dillusionment--very nice. :) 
inkblot13 said...
Nov. 3, 2011 at 1:47 pm
This is amazing, the feeling you put in the poem is incredible! Good job
petleavitt replied...
Nov. 4, 2011 at 2:23 pm
Thank you soooooo much!!!! 
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