Does that make me poor?

October 21, 2011
People only care about money.
But would you still love me if I were poor?

I shop at good will but i have a cell.
I get money when I want it but our hot water is broken. Does that make me poor?

We have lots of food but a small house 3 bedrooms (plus a small room for my sister) for 6 people and 2 dogs.

I never see people out on the street but i know they are out there. Does that make me poor?





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DanielM said...
Aug. 2, 2012 at 10:47 am
Kiry.... This is my second time reading out and you opened my eyes. I use to be the type of people who made fun of people who shop at goodwill and thrift stores. But nowadays I've realized that I was stupid to make fun. Realize materials and clothes don't matter what matters is the inside of the person not what they have.
 
EatSleepWrite95 said...
Jul. 20, 2012 at 11:22 am
This is sad, but has a great message!
 
dancing.in.the.rain4ever said...
Jun. 10, 2012 at 11:26 am

I love this one!! 

 

 
DanielM said...
May 12, 2012 at 9:51 am
That was awesome poem. it was pretty deep and i liked your message. At first i was a tad bit lost but then i understood it. Great Job!!!
 
torilutz8 said...
Apr. 13, 2012 at 8:25 pm
I agree with twinnbears27. Good idea but got a little lost. Overall it's good though
 
TwinnBears27 said...
Nov. 5, 2011 at 2:12 pm
I had to read it a few times for it to make sense, but besides that I think this is pretty good. It's a good concept, and with a little clarification (third and fifth lines) this would be a great piece in my opinion.
 
MoonFire replied...
Nov. 5, 2011 at 2:21 pm
thanks so much
 
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