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Their eyes tell silent stories.
Stories that would shock even the darkest of hearts.
These eyes have seen worse than some could even dream of.
They’ve seen killing and death, and pain and suffering to extents that can be hard to imagine.
Eyes that should be learning how to read are instead being taught how to fight.
Emotionless eyes are being forced to kill in gruesome ways.
Eyes that seem to have run out of tears, because crying never helped.
Their sobs are unheard, their tears are unseen.
Children who are innocent are being ruined by men who see no hope in their government.
Men who are willing to take advantage of an irreplaceable innocence.
The eyes are deep brown.
A brown so deep you could get lost in it.
Eyes that catch attention for their beauty.
They silently tell of innocence lost and of silent tears cried.
These are the eyes of a child soldier.

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mturner said...
May 13, 2011 at 10:38 pm:
very good just work on the line breaks theyre a bit weird
 
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********($) said...
May 2, 2011 at 10:46 am:

that 's kinda sad...

those children must be sad...

i'm kinda sad...

 
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nnc97 said...
Apr. 29, 2011 at 10:42 pm:
Situations like these make you appreciate the country you live in.
 
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ilovedayna said...
Apr. 9, 2011 at 4:12 pm:
this is so sad- children need a childs life not a soldiers 
 
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lala15 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 9, 2011 at 2:01 pm:
chills! i once read a book about a child soldier
 
ArcaneGhost replied...
Apr. 9, 2011 at 10:19 pm :
Long Way Gone: Memoirs of a Boy Soldier?
 
lala15 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Apr. 10, 2011 at 1:04 pm :
yep! it was so sad
 
ArcaneGhost replied...
Apr. 10, 2011 at 2:56 pm :
There are just some unimaginable things that happen to these kids. Sometimes we take for granted the privilege of being born in America or another country where none of this stuff happens.
 
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InfamousDrake said...
Apr. 9, 2011 at 3:03 am:
Great Poem. Very Sad And True.
 
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Twinny said...
Apr. 6, 2011 at 12:22 pm:
This was a incredible&&moving poem.!it really explains how the innocent children around the world are being affected by violence.I could really see an image when you said "Eyes that should be learning how to read are instead being taught how to fight"
 
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youknowwho AQ said...
Apr. 6, 2011 at 12:21 pm:
very sad poem, and very true. its unimaginable what these kids go through.
 
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matt h said...
Apr. 6, 2011 at 12:20 pm:
its good to see someone adressing an issue this big in a straight foward way with this much emotion in such a short poem.
 
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X-CountryRunner said...
Apr. 2, 2011 at 7:05 pm:
This was a great poem it truley explains what happens around the world all the time, especially in Uganda with a civil war still going on down there for many years and kids, childern as young as 7 or perhaps lower being taken from there parents and being forced to fight for a wrong cause. So this poem really has powerful words and i hope that the people who read this comment will go to the Invisble Childern's website and become informed on whats happening to make a difference
 
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summermarrie said...
Apr. 2, 2011 at 7:49 am:
wow.. this had touched my heart... and has made me cry love this one :)
 
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rachel24 said...
Apr. 1, 2011 at 3:30 pm:
this was a reeally great poem! i have personal expieriences with this type of stuff. You did a great job! Keep writing(:
 
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Suicide said...
Mar. 29, 2011 at 9:21 am:
This makes me sad to read it. It was well written. I hate that these little children were raised to fight. Over all good job.
 
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CaptainFabulous This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 26, 2011 at 3:01 pm:

i wrote a report on chiildren in war

read some of the saddest stories while writing it your poem really gets it

great job

 
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Griffiths1998 said...
Mar. 24, 2011 at 5:36 pm:
I had to read a story bout child soldiers. its very sad...but good job!!!
 
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nitegirl said...
Mar. 22, 2011 at 5:34 pm:
Thats amazing, and i completely get it... really good job :)
 
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Maggie2014 said...
Mar. 18, 2011 at 10:07 pm:

This is an inspiring piece that not only tells a story but touches the heart. While reading this i could literally see the children, i wanted to reach out and touch them, hold them comfort those innocent brown eyes. That is what good writing is about. Bravo

 

 
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