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Their eyes tell silent stories.
Stories that would shock even the darkest of hearts.
These eyes have seen worse than some could even dream of.
They’ve seen killing and death, and pain and suffering to extents that can be hard to imagine.
Eyes that should be learning how to read are instead being taught how to fight.
Emotionless eyes are being forced to kill in gruesome ways.
Eyes that seem to have run out of tears, because crying never helped.
Their sobs are unheard, their tears are unseen.
Children who are innocent are being ruined by men who see no hope in their government.
Men who are willing to take advantage of an irreplaceable innocence.
The eyes are deep brown.
A brown so deep you could get lost in it.
Eyes that catch attention for their beauty.
They silently tell of innocence lost and of silent tears cried.
These are the eyes of a child soldier.

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Kairah027 said...
May 14, 2010 at 2:58 pm:
This is amazing i really love it :) Check out some of my stuff if you get the chance, I would love you're feedback <3
 
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Kelsey P. said...
May 14, 2010 at 2:46 pm:
That was so touching. Thank you for writing it!
 
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meemee said...
May 14, 2010 at 11:45 am:
very moving and passionate who should send it to a hation poet!!!
 
Dynamics replied...
May 14, 2010 at 12:14 pm :
very motavating i really like this 
 
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groogruxking said...
May 14, 2010 at 9:11 am:
stands on the line between what can and can't be fully expressed through writing alone. brilliant
 
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chastity said...
May 14, 2010 at 8:43 am:

this is worth reading mine arnt good but check them out

 

 
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fair246 said...
May 11, 2010 at 5:55 pm:
Well I think all the other comments all ready said this... but this piece is fantastic!!
 
Alisha62293 replied...
May 14, 2010 at 7:59 am :
This poem is amazing. wheni was reading this i was actually able to visually see what you meant to say.....very good =D
 
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Jade-McKaye said...
May 4, 2010 at 6:00 pm:

[just because its not that good to you, doesnt mean its not absolutely beautiful to others.]

-amazing writing, keep it up.

 
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Izzy=) said...
Apr. 26, 2010 at 9:22 pm:
this has been going on for many years. my question is y did it take so long for us to notice the trouble?
 
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cworth97 said...
Apr. 22, 2010 at 6:55 pm:
that is so crazy we sould do something
 
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Eilatan This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 22, 2010 at 6:22 pm:
Oh My Goodness. This is so amazing.
 
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Danielerr_Kidd said...
Apr. 22, 2010 at 5:28 pm:
this poem is more that words can explain, it beautiful.
 
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The_Fourth_Black_Sister said...
Apr. 22, 2010 at 4:03 pm:
Beautiful writing!
 
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writergirl13 said...
Apr. 22, 2010 at 2:57 pm:
Is this written abnout Darfur? It's very good!!
 
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spiritualrevelationrevealspainandrevolution said...
Apr. 22, 2010 at 2:30 pm:
this is amazing, sounds like a poems iv writtten but havnt put up, haha i may or may not have started a sticker campaign about child soldiers;)
 
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RaV3n said...
Apr. 14, 2010 at 9:12 am:
Abs. Amazing. It's the full truth and its terrible these kids go trhough this.
 
Yvaine_96This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Apr. 22, 2010 at 7:12 am :
i agree !! cud u pls check som out of my poems tho they r not as good as urs
 
bob 4 0 replied...
Apr. 22, 2010 at 2:56 pm :

ok this is not that good dont poop a cat over it!!

 

 
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Howler said...
Apr. 3, 2010 at 2:41 pm:
awesome poem!! Check out my forum its a poem called the principle people!
 
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