Oh Weary Crier

October 15, 2011
By applesauceHater SILVER, Nikolaevsk, Alaska
applesauceHater SILVER, Nikolaevsk, Alaska
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Oh weary crier,
For why have you not cried your last tear
What pain have you felt to make you feel so low, my dear
May I be in your heart, oh tortured soul
To guide you, save you, love you, for I take no toll
Only listen, your lullaby won’t be your cries to sleep
Long ago and soon to come, precious memories for you to keep
What passion do I wish to ignite
For you to stand up with all your might

That hungry feeling

Are you seeing?
Oh weary crier,
May your last tear end tonight



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on Dec. 22 2012 at 8:51 am
E.J.Mathews GOLD, International Falls, Minnesota
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This is honestly the best poem I've read. It tells a story in rhyme, and still tugs at your heart. Absolutely excellent.

on Jan. 5 2012 at 11:12 pm
applesauceHater SILVER, Nikolaevsk, Alaska
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oh wait. nm. this one i tried

on Jan. 3 2012 at 5:12 pm
applesauceHater SILVER, Nikolaevsk, Alaska
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heh:)i wasnt really trying to rhyme

on Jan. 3 2012 at 4:56 pm
applesauceHater SILVER, Nikolaevsk, Alaska
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fantabulous...love that word now

on Dec. 25 2011 at 9:09 pm
PhoenixCrossing GOLD, Tinley Park, Illinois
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This is absolutely fantabulous. It's so deep and genuine; I just love it. Great job with the rhyming and the unique format. Keep writing!

on Dec. 8 2011 at 2:02 pm
Helena_Noel BRONZE, Burnt Hills, New York
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Favorite Quote:
“I'd rather see a sermon than hear one any day; I'd rather one should walk with me than merely tell the way: The eye's a better pupil and more willing than the ear, fine counsel is confusing, but example's always clear.” -Edgar Guest

yes, it is very good. I think you could become one of the better free verse poets on this site. Please find me in the forums and let me know when more poerty of your's gets published. I'm serious.

on Dec. 2 2011 at 3:20 pm
applesauceHater SILVER, Nikolaevsk, Alaska
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I guess i agree. I dont think i can get this much postitive feedback for a while. I'm just soooooooo glad people like it so well. Thank you so much for reading it. It means alot!

on Dec. 2 2011 at 7:49 am
Helena_Noel BRONZE, Burnt Hills, New York
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Favorite Quote:
“I'd rather see a sermon than hear one any day; I'd rather one should walk with me than merely tell the way: The eye's a better pupil and more willing than the ear, fine counsel is confusing, but example's always clear.” -Edgar Guest

You sure about that? Because writing a poem that can keep up with the standards this one set would be mighty difficult! This is great, definitely one of the better free-verse poems that I've read on this site. It was very sweet and my favorite part was EVERTHING. It has some missing punctuation marks, some commas and question marks that should have been there. Plus we ought to complain to TI, I keep trying to give it TEN stars, but it won't let me. This must be fixed!

on Dec. 1 2011 at 4:52 pm
applesauceHater SILVER, Nikolaevsk, Alaska
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oh!^/////^thank you!!!!I hope I can keep on making pieces that can live up to this one!

on Dec. 1 2011 at 7:00 am
andromeda13 SILVER, Barrie, Other
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Extrodinary, that was by far the best poem i've read in a while. :) It was so emotional, i loved it! Five stars *****

on Nov. 29 2011 at 4:51 pm
applesauceHater SILVER, Nikolaevsk, Alaska
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oooh thankyou:)that means alot to me. I hope I can make more pieces that can live up to this one. Or even better

 


BluBliss GOLD said...
on Nov. 29 2011 at 9:55 am
BluBliss GOLD, New York, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Bella's love for Edward was like, "Omg. He's hot. He's mine because he sparkles. Now I'll brood the wholle book while I'm with him."

I love your writing voice! For why have you not... that was great. You know how people usually are more straightforward, like... "Why haven't you stopped crying?" I prefer your style in this more than the straightforward kind. This was great.

on Nov. 27 2011 at 8:24 pm
ChocoMint SILVER, Bloomington, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"Love is like swallowing hot chocolate before it has cooled off. It takes you by surprise at first, but keeps you warm for a long time." - Anonymous

"Love starts with a smile, grows with a kiss and ends with a tear." - Anonymous

Really good. Though i was confused at who and why the speaker was crying.  Good job though  <><

on Nov. 27 2011 at 4:53 am
applesauceHater SILVER, Nikolaevsk, Alaska
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oh schucks ^////^thank you!!!!!!!!!!!

on Nov. 26 2011 at 10:09 pm
applesauceHater SILVER, Nikolaevsk, Alaska
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There was never meant to be a space there, but its not hurting anything i guess

on Nov. 26 2011 at 6:50 pm
LifesIllusion BRONZE, Cicero, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't let your fears slow you down. Instead, chase them down and beat them."

This poem reminds me of a kind of lulluby. I really liked it. It makes me sad just reading it though. Keep up the great writing! All of your work is amazing 5/5 stars




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