A change

October 21, 2011
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With exhilarating yearnings, I saw moon’s slumber
With blazed zeal, I saw a new sun’s resplendence
The wind’s beguiling feathers tickled my sentiments
A new year it was with new expectations

After relishing the savors of the past smiles
I was no more grieved, no more desperate
The ashen land of dreams was bloomed again
And acquisition of success, was to be my fate

But, O jealousy! Thou haggard fiend and venom
Thy poison preys up courage, bruises heart
I know go cheek by jowl, gladness and grieve
From my elevated fervor, I can’t stay apart

Sun was compacted to a rind, merely in a year
But fortitude’s wick balances an intimidating flame
Before tolerance’s born fruit, all opulence perishes
It’s thy faith’s exam, not thy fate’s blame

Here comes November, year’s second last month
White pearls fall, frustrations now squiffy in smoke
The dew on thy lashes, winter’s breeze touching thy face
Are the messages of a change, a renaissance they provoke

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Lizzie H. said...
Nov. 1, 2011 at 9:25 pm
:o this is amazing! It flows so well... it also seems a little bit 19th century to me.
Rosee replied...
Nov. 2, 2011 at 1:10 am
nx,... yeah most of the pepole said the same that it has tones of 19th century in it:)
Lizzie H. replied...
Nov. 6, 2011 at 9:06 pm
xD really? oh i feel so unoriginal now... ;)
sarah said...
Oct. 30, 2011 at 6:54 am
THis is infact without any doubt the, a wonderful piece of write,,,,,u r so blessed MA....n so talented as well....stay blessed n keep writing such marvelously.......
naughty stuff said...
Oct. 30, 2011 at 6:51 am
OH MA!!!this is adorable...incredible n it truly depicts the classical history...loved it much.....u r extremely talented,,,<3
Sidrah said...
Oct. 27, 2011 at 7:27 pm
Beautiful poem...very meaningful and well put together. Keep writing. You r very talented!!!
K prince said...
Oct. 27, 2011 at 1:20 am
So Comely...ya r talented...wisdom dangles down its evry word...keep writing so that we should keep relishing ur acumen....
Arif said...
Oct. 27, 2011 at 1:17 am
thats marvellous....n i cant narrate its be\auty in words...It has a touch of 19th century's gothic poetry to it...thats indeed GLORIOUS.....n the message at the end is really enthralling....Be blessed:)
ayesha said...
Oct. 27, 2011 at 1:14 am
OMG...no words to say how beautiful it is....varied in tones n content...it has a ceaseless flow....which is what i cnat do with my poems atleast...u r really n Gifted person...May u always be happy
sunny said...
Oct. 27, 2011 at 1:11 am
UmmMMM i loved it dear....extremely exquisite....classical n enamoring....u r really god gifted
princess aree said...
Oct. 27, 2011 at 1:09 am
be happy always...Its outta mind...i had to garner my all to ensconce its depth...truly classical n sophisticated.....
fairy said...
Oct. 27, 2011 at 1:06 am
u r so genoius my friend...tahnx for this beautiful write....i  really fell elated n exalted reading it....
shafoo said...
Oct. 27, 2011 at 12:58 am
this is so magnificent.....u r really very talented....
cool fairy said...
Oct. 27, 2011 at 12:54 am
OH thast beautiful...loved it from the core of my heart...U remind me of shekspears here....be blessed:)
irza said...
Oct. 26, 2011 at 1:57 am
This is beautiful freind...i cant tell in words how much beautiful it is..be blessed...
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