October 12, 2011
By Anonymous

I'm alone, at home
and all i can think about is ending my life.
To give up,
To let go,
Leave it all behind,
and never know
If things would ever get better,
for me in the end.
Would I still suffer,
From these feelings at hand?

The author's comments:
I was in a very rough patch when i wrote this.

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Randa BRONZE said...
on Nov. 1 2011 at 12:34 pm
Randa BRONZE, Coudersport, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"If you're going to be two-faced, at least make one of them pretty!"- Marylin Monroe

Thank you. That made my day. I will definetley check out your stuff.

Lexie96 GOLD said...
on Oct. 26 2011 at 4:46 pm
Lexie96 GOLD, Havana, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Now Cinderella don't you go to sleep, it's such a bitter form of refuge, oh don't you know the kingdom's under siege, and everbody needs you. - The Killers

I'm very sorry that you've had to go through this type of pain, but I'm happy to hear that you've come out of it. I'm saying that judging by the 'was' in your note. Good work, though the inspiration was dark, this is still really good. Check out my stuff sometime?

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