Guitarist's Love

October 12, 2011
By daniblovee BRONZE, Newport News, Virginia
daniblovee BRONZE, Newport News, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
The worst mistake anyone can make is being too afraid to make one.

They take the open stage; together and alone
Bouncing DANCING Playing SINGING
Hear that music running through you, she’s sure to make a tune
Strumming every strum, slipping his fingers down her neck
She’s breathing heavy, her sound running through the speaker
Flowing through the room, piercing his heart, it’s all he knows
They’ll make an impression you won’t soon forget

He holds her tight and swings her around
Back and forth, they move together in sync, perfect harmony
Close with love
Every move, careful, precise, she stays steady, firm in his grip
He holds her tight; they jump, without falling, land together

Each pace, steady and rhythmic
They rock, they roll, in one passion
He craves the music she makes
She does just what he says; he’ll never let her go
From here to there, they all know who they are
They beat together, faster and stronger than any two hearts could

Each note, one by one, something new,
Love, romance
Wait, wait for it
Slipping his fingers




they take a bow,

and there they end their song.

The author's comments:
This is about my boyfriend, who was in a band for a short time. He always looked so happy when holding his guitar. But he looks at me the same way. I wanted to write something with a double meaning, or hidden innuendo. This is how it turned out.

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Lexie96 GOLD said...
on Oct. 25 2011 at 9:17 pm
Lexie96 GOLD, Havana, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Now Cinderella don't you go to sleep, it's such a bitter form of refuge, oh don't you know the kingdom's under siege, and everbody needs you. - The Killers

Really pretty, and I think that you achieved your goal. I really liked it, check mine out some time?

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