If 10/13/11

October 13, 2011
By J4Yc3 GOLD, Nashville, Indiana
J4Yc3 GOLD, Nashville, Indiana
19 articles 0 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
What doesn't kill you only makes you stronger


If raindrops were kisses, I would send you showers.
If I were a superhero, I would give you all of my powers.
If hugs were water, I would send you the sea.
If love were a person, I would send you me.
If forever were tomorrow, I would give you today.
If music were words, I would give you everything I know how to say.
If letters were stories, I would write you a book.
If visions were pictures, I would take a closer look.
If passion were hearts, I would give you mine.
If pain were a first aid kit, I would make sure you were fine.
If time were the future, I would give you my whole entire life.
If a ring were a preacher, I would have you as my wife.


The author's comments:
I was inspired by youtube, this person had made a song for this girl and It really inspired me to write a poem.

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on Nov. 1 2011 at 4:24 pm
secrets_of_silence GOLD, Gisborne, Other
12 articles 0 photos 439 comments

Favorite Quote:
life had i loved the more
had it but passed away
as quietly as the day
ebbs from the darkening star.


-emanuel litvinoff

this is amazing

on Oct. 26 2011 at 2:56 pm
LittleMidnight PLATINUM, Glendale, Arizona
28 articles 0 photos 63 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is but a book just waiting to be filled, you make your own story

This had got to be one of the sweetest poems I have ever read, I loved it!!!!!!!! Good job!!!!

on Oct. 26 2011 at 12:51 pm
Kev-Girl SILVER, Plymouth, Indiana
5 articles 0 photos 86 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is a maybe. Death is for sure. Sin is the cause. Christ is the cure. :)

Love is the breath of God, and prayer is the melody that makes it sing.

If you cant annoy someone, there's no point in writing.

Love is overrated, marry for money.

Oh wow, this is amazing! I really like this! :)

Lexie96 GOLD said...
on Oct. 25 2011 at 8:22 pm
Lexie96 GOLD, Havana, Illinois
11 articles 0 photos 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
Now Cinderella don't you go to sleep, it's such a bitter form of refuge, oh don't you know the kingdom's under siege, and everbody needs you. - The Killers

Beautiful poem, very sweet and well written! Think that you could check out my poem, please?

J4Yc3 GOLD said...
on Oct. 25 2011 at 4:44 pm
J4Yc3 GOLD, Nashville, Indiana
19 articles 0 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
What doesn't kill you only makes you stronger

I don't mind just don't say it's your own work.

on Oct. 25 2011 at 1:02 am
Giggity4456 GOLD, Sheridan, Oregon
19 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"The only thing to fear is fear itself."
"I hear it's beautiful over there..."

VERY good. (: Mind if I send it to my girlfriend?


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