Hate is Like A Person

October 20, 2011
By Chibi-Alexis PLATINUM, Haw River, North Carolina
Chibi-Alexis PLATINUM, Haw River, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"A penny for my thoughts, No no, I sell em for a dollar, They're worth so much more, After I'm a gonner, And maybe then you'll hear the words I been singin, Funny when you're dead how people start listenin."
The Band Perry
If I Die Young


Hate is like a person,
It's own person walking free,
It's fed, It rests, It hides behind a curtain
During hide and seek.
If you ask it on a date,
It'll definitely say yes,
If you ask about the states,
It'll definitely guess.
Hate is like a person,
A person walking free,
Hate is like a person,
Walking inside me.


The author's comments:
When I wrote this, I was in a depression. I didn't like anyone or anything and I was mean and I thought bad things. I'm not sure why.

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on Nov. 21 2011 at 7:52 am
Chibi-Alexis PLATINUM, Haw River, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"A penny for my thoughts, No no, I sell em for a dollar, They're worth so much more, After I'm a gonner, And maybe then you'll hear the words I been singin, Funny when you're dead how people start listenin."
The Band Perry
If I Die Young

Thanks!  This is a poem I read over a lot and I try to get out of it.  Most of the time it works.

on Nov. 15 2011 at 7:42 am
Chibi-Alexis PLATINUM, Haw River, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"A penny for my thoughts, No no, I sell em for a dollar, They're worth so much more, After I'm a gonner, And maybe then you'll hear the words I been singin, Funny when you're dead how people start listenin."
The Band Perry
If I Die Young

K.  Thanks! :)

Dreammer GOLD said...
on Nov. 14 2011 at 8:37 pm
Dreammer GOLD, Montrose, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Love is like quicksand the further you fall the harder it is to get out

I enjoyed this poem I can relate to it :D please feel free to look at my work

Lexie96 GOLD said...
on Oct. 26 2011 at 9:22 pm
Lexie96 GOLD, Havana, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Now Cinderella don't you go to sleep, it's such a bitter form of refuge, oh don't you know the kingdom's under siege, and everbody needs you. - The Killers

This is a good poem, and I know what you mean about the depression thing... I've had a couple of times where I've been like that, too. Think maybe you could check out my stuff sometime?


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