Magazine, website & books written by teens since 1989

Romeo, oh Romeo

Romeo, oh Romeo
Where for art thou?
Art thou in the castle?
-Nay my fair Juliet.
Art thou in a distant land?
-Nay my love.
Art thou in love with another?
-Nay dearest one.
Art thou ignoring my cries?
-Nay sweetheart.
Art thou wandering alone?
-Nay my darling.
Art thou in the company of our Lord?
-Nay my beautiful angel.
Art thou lost and afraid?
-Nay my fair maiden.
Then where for art thou Romeo? I've grown tired of guessing. You seem to be no where. Have you left me here to just simply call your name and receive no reply? What kind of cruel trick is that?
-There is no trick at all my love. Even whence thou cannot see me, I am always with you. Search for me in your heart and I will most certainly be there. I will never leave you. I love you my beautiful Juliet.



Join the Discussion

This article has 5 comments. Post your own now!

leavesThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 7, 2012 at 8:38 pm
I am a sucker for Romeo and Juliet so, naturally, I loved the poem! Great job!
 
tears-of-an-angel said...
May 22, 2012 at 3:07 pm

i agree with both of them...

love the poem....

 
LittleSully said...
Apr. 4, 2012 at 7:55 pm
So Romeo and Juliet is my all time favorite book of all time and I loved how you used them in this poem, it's beautiful
 
kingofwritersThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 10, 2011 at 7:18 pm

This is a pretty good poem; I can't seem to find anything wrong with it.

Great job! :)

 
tears-of-an-angel replied...
May 22, 2012 at 3:07 pm

i agree with both of them...

love the poem....

 
Site Feedback