i am gone

October 19, 2011
The blood is rushing
my face is flushing
my life is slipping
the blood is dripping
i am screaming
am i dreaming
i am gone
no longer along

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Lexie96 said...
Oct. 23, 2011 at 11:54 am
The only thing that I can think to say is to make sure you capitalize your (i)s, this isn't texting. I do, however, like the substance of the poem. Check out some of mine sometime if you get the chance?
TickTockMonster replied...
Oct. 30, 2011 at 10:43 am

sorry 'bout that I was typing this at like 3 in the morning after i had a bad dream


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