i am gone

October 19, 2011
By TickTockMonster SILVER, Coralville, Iowa
TickTockMonster SILVER, Coralville, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
Don't look at me like I'm insane, just because you know I am...


The blood is rushing
my face is flushing
my life is slipping
the blood is dripping
i am screaming
am i dreaming
i am gone
no longer along



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on Oct. 30 2011 at 10:43 am
TickTockMonster SILVER, Coralville, Iowa
6 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't look at me like I'm insane, just because you know I am...

sorry 'bout that I was typing this at like 3 in the morning after i had a bad dream

 


Lexie96 GOLD said...
on Oct. 23 2011 at 11:54 am
Lexie96 GOLD, Havana, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Now Cinderella don't you go to sleep, it's such a bitter form of refuge, oh don't you know the kingdom's under siege, and everbody needs you. - The Killers

The only thing that I can think to say is to make sure you capitalize your (i)s, this isn't texting. I do, however, like the substance of the poem. Check out some of mine sometime if you get the chance?


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