October 19, 2011
My body's frozen.
I'm in shock.
Tears drop down.
My breathing stops.

I cared for him,
Right from the start.
And in return,
He broke my heart.

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A_Journey said...
Dec. 16, 2011 at 6:53 pm
I like this. Short and (bitter)sweet. Great job! :D Can you check out some of my work?
Lexie96 said...
Oct. 22, 2011 at 9:33 am
Really short, but good. Who ever said poetry had to be long, right? Maybe you could check some of my stuff sometime?
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