My Own Sweet Death

October 19, 2011
By ILoveTurtles PLATINUM, Redding, California
ILoveTurtles PLATINUM, Redding, California
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The pointed edge that speared my chest had been sneaking up on me. I didn't see it coming to seek my quick demise. The arrow had failed to penetrate my still beating heart. It was enough to persuade me to attempt suicide. I failed at that to. The moon rising is the only reason for the heart in my body to continue beating as it has been for so many years. Make no mistake the sun is the only reason for me to try and exterminate myself. I know you would never let me slit my wrists like I've attempted to do for so long.The night is my only life saver. Unless you incarcerate me in your loving embrace I may not be here tomorrow to tell you I love you......

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on Oct. 24 2011 at 9:31 pm
FangPoet DIAMOND, Wichita, Kansas
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Favorite Quote:
"I am yours as long as you are mine."

"Teenagers are in the forest of bad ideas an hormones."

"Your everything i want but nothing i need."
"I hate you so much ... i love you".

"Its the ugliest cute thing ever"!

"Everything is cute in its own way

In love the paradox occurs that two beings become one and yet remain two. - Erich Fromm

It would be better in a poetic form but It was so beautiful,and a dangerous edge to it almost.Nice work.

Lexie96 GOLD said...
on Oct. 22 2011 at 9:30 am
Lexie96 GOLD, Havana, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Now Cinderella don't you go to sleep, it's such a bitter form of refuge, oh don't you know the kingdom's under siege, and everbody needs you. - The Killers

I really love it, it seemed a bit stiff in some places, but that is probably just do to the beat at which I'm reading it, because it's really beautiful. Dark, but beautiful. Mind checking out some of my work sometime?

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