To Heaven, I'd Make My Debut

October 15, 2011
By AshleyHannah GOLD, Jacksonville, North Carolina
AshleyHannah GOLD, Jacksonville, North Carolina
12 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is too deep for words-
so don't try to describe it

If paths could pave the way to you, I'd walk a million miles.
If the largest store was holding you, I'd walk all the aisles.
If the library held the key to you, I'd read all the titles
But if Heaven were the gate to you,
I'd take one of my final breaths, and to Heaven
I'd make my debut, because baby,
I couldn't stand, being away from you.

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Fayrouz SILVER said...
on Oct. 31 2011 at 5:01 pm
Fayrouz SILVER, Fargo, North Dakota
9 articles 12 photos 364 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Only dead fish swim with the stream"

This is very sweet, it sounds like something you could match music to and make a song. the rhyming does not sound stretched and painful. very good job! good luck with your writing!

Proof SILVER said...
on Oct. 27 2011 at 11:02 am
Proof SILVER, Silver Spring, Maryland
5 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
The world is yours you just have to take it

lovley and passionate this is a great peice thank you for sharing with us

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