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To Heaven, I'd Make My Debut

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If paths could pave the way to you, I'd walk a million miles.
If the largest store was holding you, I'd walk all the aisles.
If the library held the key to you, I'd read all the titles
But if Heaven were the gate to you,
I'd take one of my final breaths, and to Heaven
I'd make my debut, because baby,
I couldn't stand, being away from you.




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Fayrouz This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 31, 2011 at 5:01 pm:
This is very sweet, it sounds like something you could match music to and make a song. the rhyming does not sound stretched and painful. very good job! good luck with your writing!
 
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Proof said...
Oct. 27, 2011 at 11:02 am:
lovley and passionate this is a great peice thank you for sharing with us
 
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