Love Sickness

October 18, 2011
By NotWriting_Bazinga PLATINUM, Park Rapids, Minnesota
NotWriting_Bazinga PLATINUM, Park Rapids, Minnesota
33 articles 0 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
"She thought in Italics and felt in CAPITALS." Henry James, Jr
"The terrible part is the truth is the only thing you want to hear.... but the last thing you want to admit." Casey Dalton


Bile at the corners of the mouth
The blood gone from the face
Hands are shaking and clammy
Body is motionless and frail
Eyelids, weigh ten tons each
Breaths, shallow and too few
Throat, raw and constricted
Relentless abdominal cramps
Agonizing chest pain
Leg muscles contracting
Arms wrapped around knees
Hair plastered to neck and forehead
This is what happens to me


The author's comments:
You never truly know pain... till you have had unrequitted love...

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on Nov. 3 2011 at 12:36 pm
NotWriting_Bazinga PLATINUM, Park Rapids, Minnesota
33 articles 0 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
"She thought in Italics and felt in CAPITALS." Henry James, Jr
"The terrible part is the truth is the only thing you want to hear.... but the last thing you want to admit." Casey Dalton

I am glad that i inspire you.... =.= but should i be... lolz.... that one was written before i was with my bf and it was unrequitted love....

on Nov. 3 2011 at 12:35 pm
EarthAngel GOLD, Akeley, Minnesota
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So sad, but powerful! Love. You are my inspiration to write. You have a beautiful voice and mind.


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